When you live for a thousand years and you see all the people you love die by time or by your enemy's you seek a new life but can that life be possible or will destiny say another option for you time is an enemy to all
As JackRipper said, the FIRST thing you need to do is fix yours story's description. You're not going to get either more interest or more feedback until you make the description into something that attracts people's attention instead of chasing them away.
8252634 True and I will do that in time trust me on this so anything else you want point out to no other pros or con's and if you could point those out I will thank you for that
As JackRipper said, the FIRST thing you need to do is fix yours story's description. You're not going to get either more interest or more feedback until you make the description into something that attracts people's attention instead of chasing them away.
8252634
True and I will do that in time trust me on this so anything else you want point out to no other pros or con's and if you could point those out I will thank you for that