Isn't that nice, she made a friend and got her world view skewed.

Now I fear for our MC, this is the kind of chaos humans create, the turbulent tide of change, not by force or laws but by words.

This is actually quite good !! I only hope that he have some back bone and don't get all the shit from the pony and ask please can I have some more and bow downd an lick there's hooves.

This is very good. A nice diamond in the sea of... well, it's nice to see a good story!

I look forward to seeing more of this.

Just don't let the political views expressed herein turn you off from the story. Please?

Well man, those political views make this story even more desirable for me. Very good chapter. This chapter earned my fav.

I hope that a type of Logic Chess will get involved.
(If you do not get it, it is from Gyakuten Kenji 2, better known as Ace Attorney Investigations: Prosecutor's Path)

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OBJECTION!!!

This court will not allow the presentation of additional evidence in this case.

Talking about politics gives a story more depth to me, thus making is more interesting to read. You done good.

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I fail to see the reason why not. Objection overruled.

Nooooooooooo! I have to wait! Again!

Ah well.

Still doing great bro! Keep it up!

(Also, I'm finally reaching the point where I'm tracking enough stories to have a new chapter for something every day, so that's a plus.)

Snap my friendo!
Ya go me hooked damn it. 10/10 enjoying this story, your take on Equestrian society is rather... Different. A good different, I like all of this
Henry does come across a little... Stoney? Quite hard? I guess it's a slightly jarring learning a character with such a background established before hand. Still enjoy him though, especially now that he's already softening up to Glimmer

Wait...

So his version of humans actually are demons? Or well, at least not ya'know 'US'. I'm intrigued.

I don't really have much of an opinion on the political stuff in the chapter sept for a general agreement on all points. It does indeed really seem like the USA has turned against men in general and also whites. That's a bad state of affairs for everyone really.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, it's gonna be a good one! I can feel it in me bones.

Tolerasty bits are annoying enough irl, imao, so no like for the story. Otherwise it's good enough, so thanks and GLHF in regards to the writing.

For nearly the entire chapter I read "references to alcohol (and freshly pressed apple cider doesn't count!) or drug use, sex, or the legal system are completely absent" in the disclaimer as you were going to be avoiding those topics, but was thoroughly confused by a lack of adherence to that claim. Only towards the bottom of the chapter did realize what you meant.

As her human sex demon friend disappeared into the Everfree Forest, Starlight smiled and thought, 'Maybe a trip to the spa is in order,'

yes a spa sounds wonderful after meeting a sex demon...

Man, that guy sure managed to refine his speech from roughly shouting "Stop thief!" to getting on the author's soapbox. And Starlight, who founded her own village to promote equality because the rest of Equestria was lacking it, sure did seem initially convinced that the rest of Equestria had equality before Henry explained her own culture to her.

I'm not sure why your characters lack internal consistency, but given how hard you shoehorned US politics into the story, it seems like that's probably the reason why they are. It seemed like an interesting premise until you forced it down that path.

The chapter may sound preachy but it's not wrong.