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"That's IT! I'm done! Everything's gone to far Joey!"
"Aw come on man you can't leave me! We're he first 15 year olds to make a famous cartoon!"
"I don't care! Look at this place! It's falling apart, the businesses next door are going to sue us for ink leaks, and you've gne way to far with the whole cartoon business. I mean, come Joey, appease the gods?!"
"Dude I got it all figured out! All we have to do is give them Bendy and Bori-"
"NO! ABSOLUTELY NOT! Ok Joey, I'm leaving. Shut down the business."
"But-"
*Door slams.*
"You were my only friend..."
*7 years later*
"BOOOOORIS! If your gonna cause mischief, at least invite me along!"
*Walks into room.*
"Bo? BORIS!!! OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU! WAKE UP! Please!" *tugs on ropes. "Don't worry Boris! I'll get you out of here!"
*Man walks in*
"Joey!"
"Bendy?"
"D-did you- WHAT DID YOU DO TO BORIS!?"
"Calm down! He's just, urm, sick?"
"Y-you're l-lying!" WHAT DID YOU DO TO BORIS?!
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Hey can i get a link to the game your crossover is with
8098069 I don't think there's a proper link to the game. You can get it on steam though. You'll have to buy the game however. Sorry. Thx for the fave and follow! I gave you a suprise as well!
Be prepared! This weekend, Ipm making chapter 2!
The story isn't half bad. It just needs a little work. I like it either way. Keep up the good work.
8105778 Thx! I agree that it does need some work done. I think I have too little dialogue. Can you suggest to me what I can add or fix?
8106175 Sure, but I can tell you this. How was Bendy getting around? You need to descibe how he gets around so fast. Here's something to build... something. I don't what it's called but do this at the end. As the group runs for the exit, the door was locked and Bendy inches closer and closer to them from the other end of the hall and then do the trap door as soon as Bendy gets them and at the end of the song.
8106408 Here's the thing, we had no idea how Bendy got around in the game. I'm trying to make the story like the game as much as possible.
8107071 Ok.
8107621 Thanks for the advice though!
8110716 Good to know! Henry and Joey should've thought about that before the ink machine.