An interesting idea so far.

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Glad ya think so ^_^

It was.........Interesting........

I recommend a vampire like Alucard from Hellsing. A little comedic humor wouldn't hurt

Where are you damnit?!

Oh fuck.....

I was kinda hoping Rainbow was the deserter when I saw the title. Then when it said orange pony I was hoping for AJ to be.

Gee golly, another one?

Better get my belt unbuckled...

Damn that was brutal!

Certainly looks worth the read. Here's hoping that we get some much longer chapters, and get to see the others soon! This has a certain vibe to it, like Fall of Equestria, which I like.

KEEP GOING STRONG!!!!!!!

7986907 Oh they'll get longer. This was simply a pilot to A) get my idea out there and B) see what others thought of it. This scene was actually supposed to happen later but I loved it for an opener so I used it here and will flash back to show how it led here.

PS: Glad you're enjoying it so far ^_^

7987090 Might want to add in the next chapter the time difference at the beginning. Like "XX Weeks ago", or something to that effect.

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I won't be doing that but it'll be obvious, trust me ;)

7987727 I do, just take it from a guy who's spent eight years writing fanfition give or take, sometimes there's simple folk that need the obvious pushed under their nose.

More.

Please add more to this, I have often wondered what would happen if they turned.

This is a brilliant idea please keep this alive.