CHS towards the end of the school day....
The day was just about over, and Burst was at his locker grabbing what he needed as students began to head home. He was about to leave until he felt a familiar presence. Burst let out a sigh as he turned around. "Hello Principal Celestia." Principal Celestia approached Burst with a sad look on her face. "How can I help you?"
"Burst...please. Listen to me.", Celestia pleaded. "I left you for a completely stupid reason."
"Was it really stupid? Celestia, I'm about half your age. I'm just a young kid who's get the rest of his life ahead of him. You didn't want me giving that all up just for even the chance to hang on to you. You could never be that selfish."
"Sombra said the exact same thing. But he was wrong! And I was wrong for thinking that! Burst, I was the happiest I'd ever been when we were together! You were someone I'd been waiting my whole life for! And like a fool I gave you up." Celestia sighed. "I guess I was the one who really needed to grow." Burst took a deep breath and got up close to Celestia.
"Everyone makes mistakes. I just never imagined the day I'd see you make one. But...that's good. Mistakes help us learn. But I can't forgive you Celestia. Because I couldn't bring myself to hate you in the first place." Celestia's eyes began to tear up as Burst gave her a smile. "But that's not stopping me from accepting your apology." Celestia pulled Burst into a tight hug as tears began to flow from her eyes. Burst was hesitant, but slowly put his arms around her once again. "I won't lie. I missed this feeling."
"Me too....", Celestia said with a smile as the tears soon came to a halt. "So...what happens now?"
"I don't know. But I can't wait to make it up as I go along. I kept your number. Unless, you'd rather talk face-to-face."
"I...I'd love that.", Celestia said with a small smile. "Though now I have a new order of business to take care of. That joke you made about Sombra at Duelist Kingdom served as a good foil to how he's been acting around me."
"Celestia....that wasn't a joke. Sombra ACTUALLY tried to take over the world. He's a bad guy. He even temporarily severed Sunset and Rarity's cards. Trust me. You'd ditch him the second his true nature shows. Be careful."
"I will be." And with that, Burst and Celestia went their separate ways. The weights on their hearts completely lifted.
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You'll really love this next one! I just posted it!
7943101 Your right i did enjoy this chapter a lot
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any favorite bits?
7943174 mostly all of it and how Burst accepted Celestia apology
So Celestia thought it was a joke huh... seems legit
7943174 awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks and duel on my friend I'll be waiting
You should get a user named MLPmatthewl419 to review this entire series. I feel like it would get a very good review.
Okay, so are Burst and Celestia going to be friends or what?
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Reasons that it might (key word, might) not be the best idea:
1. A spell check puts this series above most works, but grammar isn't perfect here. One typo can get a guy who criticizes on a regular basis to tear him apart before he looks into the story any deeper than said typo.
2. Idk who the guy is and if he is into ygo all that much. Its fine for fans of the series but if he isn't he couldn't really judge how well integrated Yugioh is into the world. Not being able to judge the story as a ygo story will make it difficult to judge the plot as a whole.
3. That deleted comment by The Bread Maker is 100% true, and Bread Maker is a shitlord.
7943416 while that is true, Mr. Ren, this person mostly focuses on story aspects from what I've read.
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What do you think of the story so far Jorden?
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I'm reserving full judgement until the end but it's your best one yet so far. I can see how the rest of the plot will play out but you might just surprise me.
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As long as he understands that the story relies heavily on source material not known for prime intelligent storytelling and will walk expecting a fun crossover rather than a masterpiece then I guess it should be fine.