Celestia looked at a series of pictures on her phone, and let out a sigh. They were pictures of her and Burst during the dates they'd had. "I guess I'd better get over it. Even if he was quite boyfriend while we were together." Celestia then noticed a new text she had gotten. "I guess I could use a familiar face to talk to." Celestia drove to the coffee shop where the text had told her to meet at, and entered. "Hello Chrysalis." Chrysalis put down her coffee and addressed Celestia.
"Hello Celly. We need to talk."
"About what?"
"Your current lovelife."
"Says the original heart-breaker of CHS.", Celestia said with a joking smile. "So who told you?"
"Who else? Luna." Chrysalis's expression then turned serious. "Celestia. Luna's worried about you."
"It's because I broke up with my boyfriend. That's why she's so worried.", Celestia said with a sigh.
"Was he a jerk?"
"no."
"Did he cheat on you?"
"No."
"Did he hurt you?"
"NO!" Chrysalis was stunned by Celestia's outburst. "No. He didn't do anything wrong. In fact, he was perfect. Sure, Burst was younger, but he was always so happy and sweet. And he always had that wonderful smile. In many ways....he was the type of guy I was waiting for."
"Then why did you leave him?", Chrysalis asked.
"Because I didn't want him to miss out on his life just to stay with me. You see...I was Burst's first girlfriend. And now, I'm also his first heartbreak. But I guess my newest boyfriend is the definition of tall, dark, and handsome. And it doesn't help that he's quite the charmer."
"Well, I guess you've had the best of both worlds so far. So who's your new man?"
"His name's Sombra."
Chrysalis then spit out her drink! "HIM?! Celestia....PLEASE tell me I misheard you."
"No. You didn't. Why?"
"Celestia? Trust me. You want nothing to do with him. I remember the brief period I dated him."
"You two dated?"
Chrysalis nodded. "I dated him in high school. I fell for him, and we went out for a while. Our first date was pretty sweet, but things changed after that. I found out that he turned on the charm on every girl he came across. The guy's a total womanizer Celestia. Whoever you were with before, and forgive me for saying this, but you were totally stupid to give him up! I met Burst at Duelist Kingdom. And he's one of the sweetest guys I've ever come across. He was PERFECT for you!" Chrysalis sighed. "But if you're going out with Sombra, you might wanna keep your guard up. That's all I'll say. It's your choice." As Chrysalis left, Celestia looked at the pictures of her and Burst together.
"Burst..." Celestia held her phone close to her chest. "I never meant to, and yet I've hurt you so much. I'm so sorry...." Celestia returned home and soon went to bed. Her thoughts still pondering Chrysalis's warning, and how Burst might be dealing with this. "How did I mess it up so badly?" Celestia soon fell asleep. Hoping that the next day would bring a fresh start.
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Next chapter's up.
Good thing Celestia realized how stupid she was. More than anything she was dumb to even think of Sombra that way since I'm sure Burst told her what he tried to do in the tournament
Dang! This Story be givin me a case of the Feels!
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Well, I guess I underestimated how much drama I'd packed into this thing. Upon reading it, I'm shocked I ever had the guts to write moments like this. But I'll admit. It does make for a heck of a read.
7941331 awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks and duel on my friend
7941379 oh by far it does! The friendship is dueling series has so much better grammar and Story than the originals! I've never would've been able to pull off a series like this like you have!
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I thank you for your continued support. Rock the dragon my friend!
7941393 The Dragon Has Been Rocked!
That should totally be bursts catchphrase when he wins a duel.
7941252 Mercury: True to that and plus I have a question night. Have you ate ice cream I mean like real ice cream or does your mom buy you like frozen yogurt because they taste different and I hope your not having a flashback of a Christmas fiasco.
Leafa: Hi brother and hi mister. What are you guys doing.
Mercury: Hey sis I talking to Burst about relationships and Nights Christmas fiasco.
Leafa: Oh boy.
Mercury: Yep and also Burst I may ate blue eyes light power and combine my flame and his light to do the thing and blame Sombra if I destroyed the by Accident.
You're doing Celestia really well from an objective standpoint.
I think her best trait in this story is the irony of her character. Although she doubted the legitimacy of her relationship with Burst because he was "immature" and needed to have the experience of love and loss for the first time, Burst acted like the more mature one in his acceptance of his loss of her while she simply ran off to another guy almost immediately. Though this could be taken as a means to make her unlikeable if taken to too far of an extreme, you end it quickly enough and have her learn and begin her own growth, which she thought was what Burst needed. Between these two chapters you wrote a deeper character than any others in your story combined. Good job.
You know in hindsight I didn't really need to explain it all like this, but oh well.