Ok, you both have a point. I fixed up the description a bit, I apologize greatly as this is my first story on the site and story descriptions have never been my strong suit. I have a bad habit of not saying enough in an attempt to avoid spoiling any of the story, I shall try to make sure my descriptions from here on out are a little more concise and actually story relevant.
7870743 Mind expanding on this statement a bit? If there is something wrong with the formatting that makes the story more difficult to read, then I would be more then happy to change it. But I'm not exactly sure what part of the formatting you are finding difficult.
7871675 Strange, that doesn't happen when I read it...I know formatting on this site in general took a bit of work, the way editing works here can be a bit...Not perfect. Still, I wish I could tell you exactly why it is happening to you.
7871743 Thanks~ I will leave it up to you to decide, I will say I try to make it very...Fun, I didn't really want the story to come off as uncomfortable and abusive, but it is pretty heavy on the pet play stuff~
How did this get approved with a description like that?!
So this story is about taking commissions? I don't get it.
Ok, you both have a point. I fixed up the description a bit, I apologize greatly as this is my first story on the site and story descriptions have never been my strong suit. I have a bad habit of not saying enough in an attempt to avoid spoiling any of the story, I shall try to make sure my descriptions from here on out are a little more concise and actually story relevant.
This is a pretty good story for it being your first. I look forward to reading more.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
the formatting makes it difficult to read.
7870743 Mind expanding on this statement a bit? If there is something wrong with the formatting that makes the story more difficult to read, then I would be more then happy to change it. But I'm not exactly sure what part of the formatting you are finding difficult.
7871337 the way it starts jumping lines. a bit like this http://prnt.sc/dwa2zk
7871675 Strange, that doesn't happen when I read it...I know formatting on this site in general took a bit of work, the way editing works here can be a bit...Not perfect. Still, I wish I could tell you exactly why it is happening to you.
7871922 ahh it's on my end. nevermind then
7871743 Thanks~ I will leave it up to you to decide, I will say I try to make it very...Fun, I didn't really want the story to come off as uncomfortable and abusive, but it is pretty heavy on the pet play stuff~
This is not "pet play," this is coercion, slavery, abuse, and human(oid) trafficking. Please mark it as such. The Dark tag would help too.