After a local do gooder is killed, chasing after a mugger, he is visited by an unexpected entity... One who has use of such a noble soul, to protect a besieged Equestria, not as a Human... But as something much stronger, an Elder Lich.
Surprisingly, there are little to no fics with this type of Necromancy. The type where one guy controls and entire army of mindless undead. And the ones that are are either poor quality, on Haitus/cancelled, or are too short.
I hope you can continue this, it has a lot of potential.
Also as a note, read over your chapters before releasing them, it helps A LOT with grammar and spelling mistakes.
Ah necromancy such a beautiful yet disgusting art at the same time, beautiful if done correctly and disgusting to those who only know the incorrect ways of it. Such a counter balance is it not? To be a dead thing made by a dead power in the shape of the dead. I will be watching this story closely my friend it intrigues me quite a bit. While there are a few errors in spelling and grammar im overlooking them simply because you have done something exceedingly rare that being you took a relatively unused concept (Which in it of its self is super rare) and made it something very worthwhile. I await the next chapter with much hope that you will continue to weave this great tapestry of a tale with the same soul you put in this one. Au Revoir!
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Surprisingly, there are little to no fics with this type of Necromancy. The type where one guy controls and entire army of mindless undead. And the ones that are are either poor quality, on Haitus/cancelled, or are too short.
I hope you can continue this, it has a lot of potential.
Also as a note, read over your chapters before releasing them, it helps A LOT with grammar and spelling mistakes.
oooh a lich story very rare cant wait!
Ah necromancy such a beautiful yet disgusting art at the same time, beautiful if done correctly and disgusting to those who only know the incorrect ways of it. Such a counter balance is it not? To be a dead thing made by a dead power in the shape of the dead. I will be watching this story closely my friend it intrigues me quite a bit. While there are a few errors in spelling and grammar im overlooking them simply because you have done something exceedingly rare that being you took a relatively unused concept (Which in it of its self is super rare) and made it something very worthwhile. I await the next chapter with much hope that you will continue to weave this great tapestry of a tale with the same soul you put in this one. Au Revoir!
Cliffhanger,before the best moment..............huuhuh, well, we will hold out.
MOAR!
Rip cliffhanger. Really like the story and hope you keep up the good work
Many of the new fics I've read have pleased me greatly, your's is no exception.
I need More !!!!!!!!
francise doesnt matter but never underestimate the weak and cute never reminds me of the heaarthstone deck i use
I’m not going to sugar coat this. This line has so much wrong with it you can’t tell what any of it says until after the last comma.