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I found myself looking at two gigantic blades, near identical to the one from the first nightmare I had. I began swinging them in the air, practicing combat strikes and blocks. I did this for a good few minutes until I heard a slicing noise next to me and felt added wait to my left blade. I looked to my left and saw what the added wait was
Good setup, and glad to see the chapters getting longer. I dunno, I just prefer 3k word chapters myself, but maybe I'm too picky : ) I'm quite interested to see were this goes, though I don't see this helping her be friends with Twilight or the others, but guess I'll see how it goes.
It looks like FIMFiction messed up your HTML. Which I suppose may have been partially my fault because I said "line break" where I meant "new paragraph" but is mostly FIMFiction's fault because the coding went dumb.
You should make Trixie be conflicted with her self to not kill people just hurt them alot but not kill them .
Yeah! Update!
That is all.
So this is like a batman/assassins creed deal here??
So this is like a batman/assassins creed deal here??
1079778 it's like batman, the punisher, and spawn put together. with a little bit of ghost rider.
1079855 gore and clop will come later, so will dark depressing moments. just thought i'd tag ahead of time
1079901 http://bloodynight92.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d55t03l
there you go
Okay . . . why carbon and steal?
its spelled steel
I found myself looking at two gigantic blades, near identical to the one from the first nightmare I had. I began swinging them in the air, practicing combat strikes and blocks. I did this for a good few minutes until I heard a slicing noise next to me and felt added wait to my left blade. I looked to my left and saw what the added wait was
weight.. its weight
for walking on clouds of clouds of coarse .
wat happend here?
I uttered only two words; “buck . . . you . . .”
forgot the whole caps thing here
1080447 'buck you' isn't supposed to be capatal.
if you could be so kind, could you suggest this story to friends?
sweet! i can't wait for the next chapter
1104635 actually, it's not what you think, but you'll have to read further to find exactly WHAT it means
837284 hey, are you still reading my story?
Good setup, and glad to see the chapters getting longer. I dunno, I just prefer 3k word chapters myself, but maybe I'm too picky : ) I'm quite interested to see were this goes, though I don't see this helping her be friends with Twilight or the others, but guess I'll see how it goes.
All the scenes with Trixie and her MareDoWell self reminds me of Venom.