Oh shit this is gonna be good

Ow my this is going to be good update

Dame you got som explainin to do.

Pretty sure sunset will be okay with this. She is a pony turned human.

Bwahahaha!! meep! Oh lordy gracious me oh my, what a throbbing overcooked pickle! Bwahaha... Sorry gruvian, i get tickley geekouts over this fanfic, please provide moar.

They were one of her spevial panties for these experiments. A little small, but Twilight found that advantageous.

Special.

Twilight’s phone rang from her bag, and made her jump. She reached into her vibrating bag, and pulled out her phone as lyrics about Space
Unicorns blared. Sunset’s chibi avatar flickered on the screen. Twilight sighed.

Mid paragraph break.

Sorry I didn't catch it the first time. I was er, uh, busy reading.

Whens the next one

7788204

Soon. Should have it done by Christmas.

"Eh, he passes the Harness Test. Besides, I understand the appeal. See, Equestria has this species called 'Diamond Dogs' and this one time, at Magic Camp-"

"Most found the mold like smell, sicening, but Twilight always found it soothing"

*sickening

Most found the mold like smell, sicening, but Twilight always found it soothing. 

sickening
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However, today twilight had a different objective.

Cap.
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They were one of her spevial panties for these experiments.

special
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“Twilight, are you in here?” Fluttershy’s soft voice asked from the bathroom’s entrance. “I was sure I seen her come over here,” Sunset mused. Twilight turned ghostly pale. The ride was no longer fun.

Different speaker means separate line for dialog.
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Spike lifted himself back up, and realighned himself. 

realigned
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A few paragraphs need spacing.

Dis gon b sooooooo guuuuuuuuuuuuud!!

After I bleach my hard drive.