Good chapter, so far the most enjoyable of the three. Twilight still seems a bit off to me and there is still a slight mess in tenses - notably in the verb ask, the flashback part and the ending. Anyway, it was great to see Shimmering's past and more onservations from Ponyville.
Good chapter, so far the most enjoyable of the three. Twilight still seems a bit off to me and there is still a slight mess in tenses - notably in the verb ask, the flashback part and the ending.
Anyway, it was great to see Shimmering's past and more onservations from Ponyville.
7942179 Thanks! Yeah, I'm aware of those things and I'm going to fix them later this week hopefully.
I figured that people would like to know what happened.