7579779 Thanks! I'm really glad you like it 3rd chapter is almost ready, I just need to decide something and double check everything. It should be released later this week.
Nice chapter, great mental development for Shimmers Twilight at the beginning sounded a little too excited, more like Pinkie than the awkward unicorn we know, but oh well...
7939326 Thanks! Yeah, I might have gone a little bit out of character there. Originally, there was something more that I never published because I thought it was too awkward. I guess I made her more jolly instead. Not my proudest part of the story anyway.
Once again, another great chapter.
Not much to say this time so keep up the good work
7579779 Thanks! I'm really glad you like it 3rd chapter is almost ready, I just need to decide something and double check everything. It should be released later this week.
Nice chapter, great mental development for Shimmers Twilight at the beginning sounded a little too excited, more like Pinkie than the awkward unicorn we know, but oh well...
7939326 Thanks! Yeah, I might have gone a little bit out of character there. Originally, there was something more that I never published because I thought it was too awkward. I guess I made her more jolly instead. Not my proudest part of the story anyway.