I love this chapter a lot please upload more chapters if u can find time

Love the Chapter!... And this is a suggestion you don't have to if you want to but I think Kitty should become good seeing what she doing is wrong and grows to like Jake but it's only a suggestion I'm sure you have other things planned

Hmm, his team seems a little heavy on the special attack side of things. Anot enemy with a pretty decent special defense would easily be able to stand up to the team and be a serious problem.

Nice choice in music.

"Please Discord. Twilight was just trying to settle my concerns." Said Jack

Jack or Jake?