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Sword Master
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Sword Master
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Possibilities, this story could go either way very easily! I'll watch for now
It's a decent start.
It gets my like and if it keeps this up I'll fave it.
Team Darkness. Shit thats all I could come up with. Also keep up the amazing work.
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Well thanks, you know I originally had them named as Dark Trainers. Oh well, I think Team Smoke still fits them well enough.
7562899 I kinda thought team shadow or darkness. Team eclipse maybe?
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That's good.
...Shit.
7562977 thanks. It kinda just popped into my head. Also which one exactly?
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Team Eclipse
7563576 ok. Thanks!
7563591 Team Eclipse is an okay name but how about Team Nightmare or Team Catastrophe where they are trying to either bring back Nightmare Moon or they are trying to bring the end of the world with a shadow version of a Pokémon that can destroy the world.
Thanks to all those who have sent in new team names. I've read through them and will choose one to take. I'll make a note about it once I finish chapter two. I'll also give credit to the person who helped come up with the new name. By means go back to chapter one to see who won
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I'm here to say you've won. I choose Team Catastrophe. I'll give you credit after I finish chapter two.
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I thank you for helping out. Your Team Eclipse came in a close second. I still thank you for submitting a team name to help me out.
7563728 Sweeet~ I'm honored that you picked the team name that I gave and I'm glad to be of help.
7563730 just trying to help!
This story is awesome. Keep it up man. I love the story.
Much Bro love.
Idea for anime opening. Obviously you have to go with a Pokémon opening. I would either use "I wanna be a Hero" from Pokémon advance (best season in my opinion) or you use "Unbeatable" from Pokémon advance battles. Either of those two would work. But I would recommend using the English full songs and not the TV versions but it's up to you. Anyway best luck on the story and can't wait for more.
The bloody metal arm is a SNAG MACHINE. The scouter on Michael's (the official name of XD's protagonist) is called the AURA READER. Get your facts straight, I bet you haven't even beaten the game before, and you need to desperately work on your spelling there buddy. Other than that, it's an okay start.
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I have beat Pokemon XD, but it has been a long time since I played it. I now have changed it and keep it that way. Thanks for helping me remember Pokemon XD.
7571864 I love this story a lot keep me updated on the story
I love this chapter a lot please upload more chapters if u can find time
Love the Chapter!... And this is a suggestion you don't have to if you want to but I think Kitty should become good seeing what she doing is wrong and grows to like Jake but it's only a suggestion I'm sure you have other things planned
Let me guess. Celestia is jake's mother.....SHOCKER. Sorry if I sound like an asshole but that consept has been used to many times with me.
I think that this story is getting to a weird twist the more chapters that r being uploaded I love it so much keep them coming as much as u can
so crazy idea but why don't you use the physic types to translate what the pokemon say?
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Hm, what a crazy idea. I'll think about it.
7614393 that's all I ask good story by the way
that's a great chapter my friend can't wait for more uploads soon
Sun or Moon?
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I preordered Sun and when it does come out in November, you can expect to see Sun and Moon Pokemon make an appearance.
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I preordered Moon. Lunala looks good.
awesome chapter my friend can't wait for more
Dude, Nice story so far, keep up the good work
I agree keep uploading more chapters to this story I'll b waiting my friend
I love it a lot keep it up my friend
what this guy said. good job. nothing more to say see you next chapter
Unlikable chump "OC" and stale premise. The arbitrary nature of this story doesn't help either.
Thumbs down.
7777910 Hay that isn't nice thing to say or do I believe that the oc is great and I like it so no dissing
7779793 Your grammar and content are an unsurprising combination.
The point still stands though. I was never a bully, but this "OC" really does have a punchable and unlikable vibe.
Lucky guy I always wanted to live in Equestria and be a Pokemon trainer I'm excited for the future chapters keep up the good work
7782463 so its there own oc and if they think is a great character its a great character
7783557 Going by your own logic, Bella Swan and Dave Langdon are good characters as well.
7783495 Wait, is this a self-insert fic?
7783567 see now u r understanding it now
Great chapter my friend can't wait for more uploads to this story please keep me posted
Interesting enough with with the ideas that I can deal with the technical issues that this has.
Hmm, his team seems a little heavy on the special attack side of things. Anot enemy with a pretty decent special defense would easily be able to stand up to the team and be a serious problem.
great chapter my friend cant wait for more uploads my friend I'll b waiting my friend keep me posted
7563730 I am finally able to read this story. I've been busy with some other stories I had been slacking on.
Anyways I'm loving the story so far. Time to continue on this adventure. 
All I can say is I'm loving this story. Excuse me, I have more reading to do.
7614393 I can't believe you through that mystery in your story.
I hate and love it when writers do that. I was on the verge of tears at the end. 
I don't know why but when Celestia breaks down crying, it makes me really sad. 
Anyways I love this story even more because of that mystery. 