Interesting start, I like the setting, makes me want to find out more about what happened and I like the main character, though the other villagers can go eat a schweinestucker.
Hmm, I wonder if he'll get a diamond dog and changeling companion.
This a pretty decent fic. Pacing is fine, character development seems great as well and unlike other fics that I will not name, I understand fully in what is going.
Though I did notice a few grammatical errors but they were barely noticeable.
I might just track the fic, after reading the second chapter of course.
This reminds me a lot of the fantasy novels I read as a kid, as well as a Paper Mario style story I once read. Can't really say much as it is just the start, but clearly somepony is being set up. Outcasts are never liked all that much. Normally I would read the rest as there are quite a few chapters, but it's quite frustrating with my memory to remember what I read between updates.
Don't normally go for Mature Dark, Anthro, Sex or Gore tags, but this story has intrigued me. Plus I am a hypocrite when it comes to mature anthro... Guess it was too sexually violent for a Teen huh Don't like the fact that my favorite little Pegasi seem to be the enemies of the Dragon Tribe. I happen to have a thing for Pegasi, I don't know why... Hopefully, this can improve past casual tribal racism.
I will track this and pick this up again once it is complete so I don't have to do too much remembering to do between chapters. I can remember this chapter at least.
One thing:
"I've been scavenging, foraging, and generally avoiding everypony." I replied honestly. She became very upset when I tried to lie, so I had simply stopped lying in favor of brutal honesty.
Always good to spite your mother's issues with lying about your day, with brutal honesty in the hopes to teach her not to ask you silly questions. My mother repeats herself over and over with her questions so I have taken to saying no and the opposite of what she wants to hear, just to train her not to do it when she knows the Celestia damned answer already!
This is interesting i Will follow this.
Just one little question How far in to the future is this?
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As far as timeline goes, It's set a few hundred years in the future. A lot of lore will be explained as the story progresses ^.^
Interesting start, I like the setting, makes me want to find out more about what happened and I like the main character, though the other villagers can go eat a schweinestucker.
Hmm, I wonder if he'll get a diamond dog and changeling companion.
This a pretty decent fic. Pacing is fine, character development seems great as well and unlike other fics that I will not name, I understand fully in what is going.
Though I did notice a few grammatical errors but they were barely noticeable.
I might just track the fic, after reading the second chapter of course.
Cheers mate.
This reminds me a lot of the fantasy novels I read as a kid, as well as a Paper Mario style story I once read. Can't really say much as it is just the start, but clearly somepony is being set up. Outcasts are never liked all that much. Normally I would read the rest as there are quite a few chapters, but it's quite frustrating with my memory to remember what I read between updates.
Don't normally go for Mature Dark, Anthro, Sex or Gore tags, but this story has intrigued me. Plus I am a hypocrite when it comes to mature anthro... Guess it was too sexually violent for a Teen huh Don't like the fact that my favorite little Pegasi seem to be the enemies of the Dragon Tribe. I happen to have a thing for Pegasi, I don't know why... Hopefully, this can improve past casual tribal racism.
I will track this and pick this up again once it is complete so I don't have to do too much remembering to do between chapters. I can remember this chapter at least.
One thing:
Always good to spite your mother's issues with lying about your day, with brutal honesty in the hopes to teach her not to ask you silly questions. My mother repeats herself over and over with her questions so I have taken to saying no and the opposite of what she wants to hear, just to train her not to do it when she knows the Celestia damned answer already!