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This is interesting i Will follow this.
Just one little question How far in to the future is this?
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As far as timeline goes, It's set a few hundred years in the future. A lot of lore will be explained as the story progresses ^.^
Interesting start, I like the setting, makes me want to find out more about what happened and I like the main character, though the other villagers can go eat a schweinestucker.
Hmm, I wonder if he'll get a diamond dog and changeling companion.
Is something wrong with the rating system? I can't upvote
Welp, that went well.
Ah, so unicorns lost a lot of knowledge, most likely due to the ease of using magic fit everything.
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Dont stop writing its weary good!
Ha ha ha ha!!!
Sanguin is so Bucking awesom i Love her style.
You my friend is a fantastic writer i Love this so much keep it going.
Serious question tho, how anthro are talking here?
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With their mouths?
I'm not sure I understand the question.
As much as a dumbass he is, I really like broomstick :) also glowing eyes are cool.
Dame dude you write fast 4 chapters in 1-2 days you are amesing.
Oh right Love the story to
Ha ha ha
You are a comedy genius if you were her i woud hug you for Being so awesom!
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If I was magically offered or something, I would definitely be Sanguine Dreams in a heartbeat.
(The Tribal/Anthro/Mare, not myself as I am now. Being a human sucks.)
7547055 I think he meant how anthro are the characters.
This chapter was hilarious, reminds me a bit of my playthrough of modded Fallout 3 with nudist perks.
I like the characters, they're quite likeable (if stupid in case of Boomstick) and different from one another. I imagine Sanguine's attitude started with being excluded from the others by being forbidden to use magic, she then started going against other tribe rules.
Welp, that's going to be an interesting journey.
7547055 no like the degree of anthro morph, are the heads still equine? Is it feet or hooves? I figured the hands, full body fur, and tits.
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I provided a picture for the story to reference how anthro they are. Just click on it for a larger version.
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I just realised that I haven't once mentioned the fact that they have tails for four chapters x-x
For their anthro-ness, they have a pony head and mane, a tail, mostly human body until the thighs where it shifts into a more pony-esque leg ending in hooves.
Their bodies are covered in a thin fur coat that becomes thicker during winter as well.
Love it
7549778 how did I miss that picture
Keep on the good work
Way dident it inform Me you uppdated sak samma time to read!!!
Well, that went well.
Pfft, si she's info bondage.
Time to start the trip!
I recently updated this story to a Mature rating, So I'm now able to do more than hint and tease at sex ^.^
If you're not into that sort of thing... eh?
But just so y'all know, Prepare for them saucy scenes.
Tho's to are idiots...i Love it *sqeee*
Com one guys and girls thums up
Im so ready for som doggo's!
ha ha ha
Keep Being awesom.
Poor changeling, I just hope they won't all be treated as monsters to be shot.
I'm totally sure that nothing will go wrong with these two bumblers trying to sneak past the dogs.
Welp, that actually went quite well. And the world is in a really sad state when Snoop considers someone not randomly killing his brethren rare.
Hmm, now she'll have to deal with pegasi... Hopefully, maybe they can be negotiated with too.
So cool to see some intelligent and well spoken diamond dogs.
This a pretty decent fic. Pacing is fine, character development seems great as well and unlike other fics that I will not name, I understand fully in what is going.
Though I did notice a few grammatical errors but they were barely noticeable.
I might just track the fic, after reading the second chapter of course.
Cheers mate.
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Thank you for your comment!
(I barely get any, and a lot are from a few that follow me ^.^)
Let me know your thoughts on this story, or any of my others!
YOU ARE AWESOM!!! So many chapters already i Love it!!!
Yep. My suspicions were correct.
You've had only my curiosity but now you have my full attention.
No grammatical errors (At least I think there isn't) .
Pacing is still amazing and for that you get The Legion's seal of approval.
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Where it with pride my friend.
I was pretty much told to "Go here, read this." But I'll admit, this story had me pleasantly surprised. Well written with a sense of humor I can appreciate. A few minor nitpicks here and there but nothing remotely worth mentioning. I do usually tend to avoid stories with the anthro tag. Not that I have anything against anthro mind you, it's simply that I prefer my ponies as actual ponies ^_^ But anyway, This story was quite amusing so far and I'll be adding it to my follow list.
Also I can't help but imagine Boomstick and Tenna to look a little like good ol' Thirty Thirty here XD
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Thank you for reading as well as commenting!
If you want to go over any nitpicks or ask questions, feel free to send me a private message
You did great whit the mindfing.
Im in Love whit this story its
one of the best.
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You did good. I just hope no changelings were harmed in the process.
Yeah, I can see that going just peachy, attacking then in their home.
so, the dogs have been infiltrated. its also clear that whatever changelings do in this world is probably a lot worse than just steal your love. looking forward to seeing where this goes. Also... Hi-Ex shells? * evil cackling* I like the way those two operate. Now all we need for a complete party is some Incendiary rounds
Diamond Dogs that may possibly be changelings as well?! Eek!
What if Sanguine is a Changeling? Would if Tenna and Boomstick are changelings?! Would if the author is a changeling!!? Would if I am a changeling?! *runs for the hills*
This reminds me a lot of the fantasy novels I read as a kid, as well as a Paper Mario style story I once read. Can't really say much as it is just the start, but clearly somepony is being set up. Outcasts are never liked all that much. Normally I would read the rest as there are quite a few chapters, but it's quite frustrating with my memory to remember what I read between updates.
Don't normally go for Mature Dark, Anthro, Sex or Gore tags, but this story has intrigued me. Plus I am a hypocrite when it comes to mature anthro... Guess it was too sexually violent for a Teen huh Don't like the fact that my favorite little Pegasi seem to be the enemies of the Dragon Tribe. I happen to have a thing for Pegasi, I don't know why... Hopefully, this can improve past casual tribal racism.
I will track this and pick this up again once it is complete so I don't have to do too much remembering to do between chapters. I can remember this chapter at least.
One thing:
Always good to spite your mother's issues with lying about your day, with brutal honesty in the hopes to teach her not to ask you silly questions. My mother repeats herself over and over with her questions so I have taken to saying no and the opposite of what she wants to hear, just to train her not to do it when she knows the Celestia damned answer already!
oh i see the cover art is finished and full color now. very nice