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Applejack, applejack, Celestia already broke the contract by way of not being capable of releasing Big Mac from her service! Therefore, you are not bound by your side of the agreement!
Yeesh.
What the?
Mac
7538260 Why?
7572837 Some people like a little bit of a surprise, others don't. This makes all of them happy.
7572814 Fixed, thanks!
7573217 Yeah, I admit to this. The whole story was basically "A thing rattling in my head that I needed to write down". Thanks for taking the time to comment, but I don't think I am going to spend more time on this one. It was just... I needed to bash it out, it was pure catharsis.
7573335 No need to apologize, your opinions are not just your own but correct. Thanks for taking the time to read a silly musing.
All I can say in response to this story is
-shrug-
Your done with this story already?
7573244
Shame, while the setting is eyebrow raising, there certain is room for additional stuff here, even if it's "months/years later" kind of thing, or just snippets of interesting moments.
yer gotta - y'gotta --or-- yer goin' ta
there were a very few guard - there were a very few in the guard
Applejack grit his teeth - Applejack gritted his teeth
*****
This was a fun little adventure!
I hope you continue it someday, maybe just a few snapshots of key moments as they both serve their time.
Is there going to be a sequel for this?
7607750 Not at the moment.
7607772 when?
7607779 What I meant was, there are no plans to continue this in any way. It was just a little idea I wanted to get out of my head.
7607819 ok can you make a another chapter bout what happens to both Applejack and Big Mac's when they doing theirs serve the princesses as their royals guards (aj in the day guard and bm in night)?
7607829 Well, I wasn't intending to, but I am open to commissions.
https://www.paypal.me/TheDamaged/20usd
Click the link, follow the prompts, and I can write all kinds of naughty things that they get up to in their respective guards.
That is, $20 per chapter of 2k'ish words.
I don't know how to do that and do I get the money's?
7607958 Uh, no. That is a paypal link to send me $20USD (my standard price for 1 chapter of around 2k words).
Some stories I write for free, those are ones I just love writing, but others (ironically some of my most popular stuff) is commissioned in this way.
7608075 how do I get story for free?
7608087 I am working on other stories at the moment (Given Shape, Shining Chitin Redux, Social Engineering; are all the regular "uncommissioned" ones). Also, if anypony does pay for this to continue, I will of course be posting it here.
7608096 ok.
When characters in a story straight up call Celestia Molestia that is a huge barrier for me. The premise is interesting and Luna's character is a saving grace. I'll keep on for the moment but it's all up to how abusive celestia gets. How she treats Twilight is not a good sign though.