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Mac nods - Mac nodded
starts removing - started removing
gear unfastened Luna helped - gear unfastened, Luna helped
Down into the depths she sank - Down into the depths, she sank
Yes, Your Luna-ness - Yes, your Luna-ness
gentle lifted - gently lifted
Mac slide back - Mac slid back
"The moon grows tired most night - "The moon grows tired most nights
does not wish to each morning - does not wish to see(?) each morning
There is always guards - There are always guards
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Trying to get back into the groove of commenting on at least one of your works on a daily basis.
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If the Princess of the Land job doesn't work out for her, Luna could always make a living as a chiroptera-practor.
makes me curious about who in the guard he is not a friend to and why.
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Hmm...
Well, perhaps it's an Anglo thing.
Regardless; this story is just plain weird to me. I can't help but feel as if I've been dropped into something where the necessary information to understand what's going on has been... misplaced. I'll continue reading a bit more in the hopes of figuring it out, but it's just getting stranger the further I go.
7633608 Well, at first, the story was intended to be a short TG exploration for me to try out an idea. But then Canary had an idea of where to take it and commissioned me to write more.
So yeah, there was a fair bit of a gear-shift from the third chapter to the fourth.
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Seems like she's also good at leather-work, maybe saddlery?
7633657 Hey now, don't go blaming me. I'm only a small part of this. You are the one writing it and filling in all the details, after all. I just asked a few pointed questions.
Really though, the first three chapters were different in the sense that it felt like stuff was being thrown at the wall to make the situation more and more awkward. The story continuing in that vein would only make sense if it kept getting stranger, kinkier, and more awkward with every additional chapter (I will admit there is a temptation for that though, but I don't think it could sustain a longer story proper). Instead, we have a world and plot building using the first three chapters as the 'shock' start, and everything afterwards trying to tie it all together to make a coherent story.
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So I have noticed. It's a bizarre little think piece, I'll give it that much.
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Passing the blame after the fact gets you nowhere. If nothing else, this was a team effort.
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