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I'm excited to see what's next!

A clopfic that isn't ponies?

Someone pick my jaw from the ground, dust it off, and pass it back to me.

And then bend over so I can f**k you while I read this hot story and stuff.

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I think we all know what's next.

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What? You've never seen a humanized clopfic before?

7395237 I'm changing my name to Empty Money Pockets.

Because after this clopfic I am completely spent.

Or I might change it to Toast Ready, because after a hot session I am done.

I am charging you, reader, for writing these jokes down.

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I am charging you, reader, for writing these jokes down.

I want a refund.

7395362 I want a story dedicated to my amazing followers. Oh what's that? You don't do commission stories? Well I guess we're both fucked now.

By the way, come over here later in the week, we're heading out to a car show and I'm going there to support my little brother. I'll buy you dinner and we'll go back to my house for a game of Cluedo.

I applaud you sir

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Thanks! ^.^ What was your favorite part?

I actually fucking hate you, I got caught with a hard-on while reading this.

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Who did you get caught by?

7395569 My mum and my little sister (She's fucking 12) I'm actually in deep shit rn,..

I hate myself for liking this story

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The ending. If it were me in that situation, I think I'd die.

damn you! no lesbian fucking? what the hell?!?
JK good story bro, loved the plot, and the sequence of event was excellent, also capturing Fluttershy's lust for RD was phenomenal.
10/10.

You do a lot of stuff in first-person. Any particular reason that perspective appeals to you?

Dam Rainbow is toned.

Haha. Flutters masturbated? You my friend are a comedic genius. And you make Rainbiw's body out like a Goddess. So yes you have my fav!

This is not how I wished for Senpai Dash to notice me

MOOOOOOORE um when you get a chance of course

Fluttershy dressing provocatively in her own way to try to entice Dash...but Dash is dressing real skimpy too...I don't know if this is what you have planned, but it seems Dash may have been doing the same thing in her own way to me

Moar. NAOOO!!!

Need more!!! I like the way you show dash in this story

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My condolences!

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The sooner you come to terms with who you really are, the happier you'll be.

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Gotta save something for the next chapter, eh?

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Heh, I do.
And the reason I did so in this story might be a lot less artistically high-minded than you want to believe:
Since all the main characters of this story are female, I went with 1st person just to make it easier to avoid pronoun confusion; it's a lot easier to tell the difference between she and me than to tell the difference between she and she. ^.^

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Would you expect anything less?

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This is the first time in a long time that a comment has made me burst out laughing.

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More will be done sooner or later. Of course, if you'd rather it be sooner, you could always sign up on my Patreon and make me do it sooner! ^.^

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That's a fun theory, but I really like the idea of Dashie being oblivious until it becomes obvious. I think that fits in quite well with her character.

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How could anyone not like the way Dash is in this story?

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Well, it did take a little time for Fluttershy to get home first...

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But wallowing around in self-pity is so much fun!

This definitely needs a sequel!

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It's not even complete yet! It just needs another couple chapters.

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You are right, of course. Sorry, I`ve overlooked that. Anyway, get crackin` on the next chapter, minion!

That is, if you don`t mind

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Hey, only my Patreon supporters get to call me 'Minion'!

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So do we non-patreon viewers get Flunky, Thug, or Lackey?

Wow, well written and you captured their personalities quite well. I applaud you, good sir.

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Fine.

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Thanks! ^.^ I try.

Next chapter next chapter

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My Patreon supporters will help decide that...

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Senpai?

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Yes, I noticed you.

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Huzzah