So many probloms that clash with lore it is ridiculous and i just can’t stand it.
XENOMORPHS CAN’T FUCKING TALK YA KNOW! AND THE CHILDREN OF THE QUEEN ARE AS INTELLIGENT AS THE CREATURES THEY A GROWN FROM! not only that, BUT THEY ARE NATURALLY BORN WITH CHITIN HARDER THAN STEEL! SO THAT DRAGONS FIRE WOULD HAVE DONE NOTHING! And Khyax would not have cut his hand on the fucking cave wall becuase of, once again, chitin. Fix this, re-write the whole damn story with fixed lore thank you very much and i might consider reading this again.
Well thank you for your feedback but i like how my story is. If i had fixed lore then there would be no problems for xenomorphs at all and im not Chaos lord kirito go over to his channel if you want a story like that. And I know they can't talk but I want them to and I wrote this story because I wanted to have fun and Tinker with things. isn't my best story and certainly isn't going to be my last this is my first story and this is going to be my learning curve. this is where it all starts even if it isnt probably isn't going to be Legacy but I'm going to use it it to write my other stories and I'm going to reflect upon the story and make sure that I learn. And remember this is all fanfiction. Not every author is going to stay on par with the lore. Use your imagination sometimes you know. But i hope you do decide to come back
I don’t think you realize just how FUCKING hard it would be. How about this, you COMPLETELY make a story with ALL of that “lore” bull crap and make it NOT boring and yet still FOLLOWS THE SAME PLOT.
I’m sorry but i can’t read this anymore.....
So many probloms that clash with lore it is ridiculous and i just can’t stand it.
XENOMORPHS CAN’T FUCKING TALK YA KNOW! AND THE CHILDREN OF THE QUEEN ARE AS INTELLIGENT AS THE CREATURES THEY A GROWN FROM! not only that, BUT THEY ARE NATURALLY BORN WITH CHITIN HARDER THAN STEEL! SO THAT DRAGONS FIRE WOULD HAVE DONE NOTHING! And Khyax would not have cut his hand on the fucking cave wall becuase of, once again, chitin. Fix this, re-write the whole damn story with fixed lore thank you very much and i might consider reading this again.
Well thank you for your feedback but i like how my story is. If i had fixed lore then there would be no problems for xenomorphs at all and im not Chaos lord kirito go over to his channel if you want a story like that. And I know they can't talk but I want them to and I wrote this story because I wanted to have fun and Tinker with things. isn't my best story and certainly isn't going to be my last this is my first story and this is going to be my learning curve. this is where it all starts even if it isnt probably isn't going to be Legacy but I'm going to use it it to write my other stories and I'm going to reflect upon the story and make sure that I learn. And remember this is all fanfiction. Not every author is going to stay on par with the lore. Use your imagination sometimes you know. But i hope you do decide to come back
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Dog you need to calm down
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I know this is late but
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Lrr_VVtyUA8
I don’t think you realize just how FUCKING hard it would be. How about this, you COMPLETELY make a story with ALL of that “lore” bull crap and make it NOT boring and yet still FOLLOWS THE SAME PLOT.