A Warrior, a Preistess and a Thief need a Magician to open a very important underground vault. The Magician they get isn't anything they expected. Or wanted. But they have to deal with him, anyway, as he's their Sol chosen champion. Faust help them.
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thanks for the chapter
9556332
You're welcome!
It wasnt bad till this arc.. However its FAR TOO CLOSELY resembling the shetland isles arc of "The Chase" for my liking. Like way too close even with your changes.
9561940
Well, we ain't done yet… And now I may need to see about reading The Chase…
To be completely honest many points pace alongside the other story to such a degree it was assumed you already read it and perhaps was inspired. Take that for what you will. Its just how it reads.
9562113
That would the co-author of this story, Ron Jeremy Pony. I have yet to read it.
9562113
Guilty as charged. I read, and am a fan, of The Chase. While I'm trying to do something different with our version of The Shetland Isles I did let my love of that story bleed through with more than a few nods toward it. That said, there is far more at work here than what Bucky faced, and honestly, I feel if it was Bucky in Endymion's shoes he most likely wouldn't make it. This isn't a problem that can just be overpowered, and the use of Black Magic won't mean much in the long run.
I definately get that. The oblique references in lead yp chapters were nicely done. I still stand by my thought however thay it just felt too close to the inspiration, not that that is a bad tjing. Just felt like i had read this who atc before. Either way i was enjoying it. Its a fun read.
9562342
Thanks, and know that most of the similar references are pretty well done. Things are getting ready to be kicked up a bit.
Thanks for the update
9585501
hey, i calls them as i sees them. i make insightful/hilarious comments when i can and i try to make it match the personalities of the in story characters. had i done this in the early chapters when they were unable to admit their feelings for each other it would have seemed odd. still would have been hilarious though. it could also be taken two ways. 1. constantly staring at her plot. 2. sex. that is literally it. sex.
9585517
LOL! Will, I hope future chapters meet up to your expectations.
Will this be updated soon?
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We're working on it. Ron Jeremy pony is employed full time and his family grown some, so his time is a little more dedicated to that than to writing atm. I may work on it eventually, but what with other obligations currently weighing on me, it will take some time. That, and the current doc for Rune Soldier keeps crashing my laptop. I'll have to devote a singular doc for every upcoming chapter from here on.