A Warrior, a Preistess and a Thief need a Magician to open a very important underground vault. The Magician they get isn't anything they expected. Or wanted. But they have to deal with him, anyway, as he's their Sol chosen champion. Faust help them.
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I hope Fluttershy spends a good amount of time and effort to earn the forgivness for what she had done!
also looking forward tot he next chapter, great work!
*snickers* Mommy? I don't really think it will take to long for Endy to forgive Shy. I hope. I also can't help but wonder what those three did when they left the bar. Can't wait for the next chappy.
Fluttershtly just needs to look like shes aboit ti cry, and Endy will forgive her. And if he makes her cry the rughteous fury of a thousand bronies will rain upon him.
7442496 That's the plan.
7442611 Yeah, I don't think it will take much for Endymion to forgive Fluttershy. As for what happened to Endy, Flash, and Herz after leaving The Distillery? Well, we may have to get to back to you on that…
7442888 Not to mention the righteous fury of his first mare, Pinkie Pie. She will own his sorry ass if Shy sheds a single tear… Operative word here is "if."
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We will mourn endy"s balls that dash will kick in should fluttershy cry.
I love the story so far, keep it up.
Mmmmm.... nope, dont feel this resolves anything. Kicking the can down the road as it were. Firstly im not going to comment on why this is all kinds of wrong. I don't like how it was quickly swept under the rug and Fluttershy was accepted. Especially since this is 2 days later, I feel we are missing the most important part of this. The fight. We get is this:
Thats it, no questions asked until 2 days later. This makes no sense, if we saw how remorseful Fluttershy was at the time maybe this chapter wouldn't be so hard for me. She is basically getting a free pass on her crime because she's their friend. Even with the, "You are not part of this herd yet" part i still feel that this should have been resloved before anything else. Wedding put on hold, parties locked in a room while feelings are expressed. Fluttershy not allowed to apologize for the six thousandth time. Then as End renumerates on what was said he could then have his little existential crisis. That would have felt more natural...
Ok got that off my chest, no matter the flaws I still seem to enjoy this fic keep up the good work.
Wait, why did she give them 4 menus?
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…I'll never tell…