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Perhaps The Rasp has spared the Crystal Empire and they can find a cure. At least some of the ponies have not been affected, right? Maybe Luna has the answer...
Spike sure is having a terrible time. He must be so very scared and angry. Maybe there is still some hope.
Some reception.
The style of story telling you used for this fic was a grand choice. Good horror is not done by focusing on the terrifying monster or gory imagery (although it does help if used properly.) It's capitalizing on the audience's fear of the unknown which you did a pretty good job at.
Through Spike, we saw a world facing a crisis beyond any of their understanding and having no knowledge on how to handle it, and each character was forced to make choices with what little information they had. This story, to me anyway, was a good balance terrifying hopelessness, moral shredding, and stubborn optimism and hope. I enjoyed the ride and would be glad to revisit this world.
Heck, even now at the end i hope that, somehow, Spike survives so we can continue seeing this forsaken world through his eyes. not only because it allows us to see every type of pony on an equal plane as an outsider, but also because at this point, the universe seems hell bent on making sure he lives and suffers through this to document every stage of this nightmare to the very end. No matter how far into the future that is.
Hope to read something from this world again.