Fluttershy was out in the market, purchasing more carrots for Angel, when she saw Big Macintosh, as she did everyday, walking down the path in between vendors, looking for his spot among them. Truthfully, the only reason the mare came down to to market was to see him. She raised her hoof in greeting, per usual, but received only a grunt in reply. He did not look up, and seemed partially annoyed with her presence. The pegasus's confidence shrunk as her worry grew. What had him bothered? Was it her? Did she do something wrong? Should she ask him? No. It was none of her business.
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Big Mac was in the same mood as yesterday. No waves. Annoyed demeanor. Fluttershy needed help.
"Whatever is it, darling?" Rarity asked after Fluttershy inquired if she could help her.
"Well, um... A friend of mine... He, uh, he seems mad at me. But I don't know why."
"Oh!" Rarity's Stallion Sense was tingling. "Is there anything in particular he did to give off this vibe?"
"Um, well, I waved at him, but he didn't wave back... And he looked annoyed at me. I... I think I mad him angry, but I don't know how. Then... Normally we walk home together, for a ways, but he left early, saying he had work. He's been like this for a few days."
"You have nothing to worry about. Whatever it is, he'll get over it."
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Rarity was right.
At the market, Fluttershy paid for cherries, a bit more than she expected, but fair nonetheless. Her special somepony had brought a few friends. She looked at him, preparing a useless wave, just as he smiled and laughed at a joke one was telling.
Her heart seized up, and tried to push it's way out of her chest. Everything but his smile blurred, and her world became brighter.
Then it ended.
Her heart burrowed back to it's original place. Her vision cleared; the world seemed dim. But she held on to that feeling of happiness.
Later, he was with his friends again, but he still accompanied her home, and she got to know his friends a little better.
He lingered behind at the fork where they had to split, so she hugged him. The happiness gave her the courage. As he turned to walk away, she noticed his legs. They were well muscled, and her heart gave a little flutter at the sight.
"Uh... Um... Big Mac?"
"Eeyup?" He asked, looking at her.
"You... Uh... Have s-sexy legs."
He smiled, blushing, and went on his way.
Yeah, okay. Not the best. But I needed to get it out of my system.
So this is pretty much how last week went.
I'm putting my life in my stories.
Meh, whatever.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FS made a saucy comment about Big Mac!
2241954 IKR?!?
Dat random chapter.
didnt see that coming...
DAT ENDING!
Shmexy legs...
All aboard the clopfic train!
Is this legitemately unfinished? OR IS IT LIES?!?!
2488034 It's unfinished.
I just got back from my Yu-Gi-Oh craze.
I did a book report on this for my English 1 class, Got a 100.
2501512 I feel so honored...
Not to try to extract any spoilers, but what are your plans for this? That chapter could be used as an ending, although one that would leave one guessing, it would also create creativity within people. Maybe even get some alternate endings or side stories from fans. You do whatever you want to with it, but keep that in mind...
2505902 Just wait another few weeks, I got stuff planned.
I take inspiration from the things happening in my life, because, sadly, I'm very inexperienced with love.
So wait, and you shall see.
2509302 I have the same dilemma in my life , Best wishes friend.
Very bold of Flutters to say that word.