i walked into my house, and just a month after my djing career took off i was already sick of it, sick of my dream job. i had begun to become depressed, i went for a lot of walks to inspire new beats, and took up smoking. the only things that now brought joy into my life were knowing the drug i took killed everyone who took it but me, the drug giving me psychokinesis that at this point still had been growing in power each day, and my little pony friendship is magic.
yes, i am a closet brony and proud. nowadays i practically spend all my free time watching the show.
i through my car keys on the counter, grabbed my eyepod, put my headphones, walked the door, started to blare kesha on my eyepod, and started my walk. the walk was the same old path i took every time, so i decided to take a different root this time.
"agh...wha...what just happened......were am i..." twilight said as she tried to remember what what had just happened to her.
"this doesn't look like ponyvill.....even equestria for that ma.....oh good a pony to talk to" the lavender pony said to herself as she trotted to what she assumed was a pony.
"Wait... thats nopony......oh no...how did i get here, why here!" she said as she trotted away.
as i walked i saw a quick splash of purple that seemed out of place
"what was that" i said as i took out my earphones and started to walk towards it
i heard a faint voice saying 'why here why here why in the name... it saw me'
"hello... whose there, you don't need to be scared, IM not your enemy!" i rose my voice and started to quicken my walk after the splash of purple.
as i neared it i noticed it wasn't hominoid but rather ran on what i could tell were four hooves. confused i took control of my body with my mind(something i tried to avoid out in public) and flew at speeds at which i was not yet aware i could reach.
as i got closer i n it was pony shaped, pony shaped but softer than a pony, like someone had drawn it for a childrens cartoon. then came the time for answers. i was sure it didn't weigh more than me, so i did something a bit reckless and new. i put myself back on the ground and took control of my legs now, forcing them to move faster and faster until i was sure i was close enough to grab the creature with my mind.
it worked i seized control of it, lifted it up and slowed it and myself to a stop.
oh no it has me... maybe i can teleport away... nope no use... IM dead...goodbye world, goodbye celestia...twilight thought.
"now what are." i said as i turned it around.
my eyes widened, and my mouth tuned into a stupid smile as i looked into the eyes of the creature.
"OH...MY...GOD!!!" were the only words that came out of my mouth
"i knew you wer..." my words flattened as i realized that the creature...pony named twilight sparkle looked terrified and was crying
"hey.. why are you crying?"i asked putting down the pony
twilight gave no response
"twilight?" i asked her now feeling concerned
"h..how do you kn...know m...my name" she said through her sobs
"ill explain later, right now we need to get you somewhere private before someone else comes."i said thinking of a government agent coming and taking the pony away for tests
"ar...aren't y..you going ...t..to...to kill me "twilight said almost unaudioably
"why ever would you think that?" i asked attempting to pick us up with my mind with no avail.
"celestia told me once of a time when she had been somehow transported to a place were creatures walking on two legs and rode in mettle carriages powered by a strange magic tried to kill her for some experimenting" she said
"ohh...well we need to go now we can talk when we get to my home. its only a bit away."i said this time lifting us a half inch off the ground.
"well i guess were walking home."i said
"how else could we get there" twilight asked
"heh....you'll see some other time" i said with a sly grin on my face
"you look exhausted ... come here"i said as i picked the pony up
"IM fine...really....uh...uhh....excuse me whats your name?"
"oh im sorry. sam, sam morbic"i told the pony.
Oh god...the grammatical errors...why?
My friend, what was going through your mind when you published this? Would you went and displayed clearly unfinished work for all to see?
You don't need a program to fix these grammatical errors. You can do that yourself just as well. This site has a spellcheck. Use it.
I would be willing to spell-check this if you want, also I have to ask how this got past moderation with all those errors.
Ordinarily, I would try to be nice - but I don't believe you're even trying when you don't take the time to capitalize the first word of each sentence.
like i said in the chapter befor the story started i am verry sorry for eny and all errors.
honestly im not sure how i still pass my english classes, i am a lot worse at spelling and puctuation than this, took me bout a half hour to correct all the spelling.
but i had a story and wanted to publish it.
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Wanting to publish is fine, that's what this site is for, and I appreciate you working hard on this and I'm sure you did try to correct the errors, I didn't actually see that many spelling errors, mostly it was grammatical errors. This is why I said that I would be willing to help you but I need your confirmation.
thanx aranompenguin
hello everyone out there who is still fallowing this storie...arandompenguin is corectig all the grammatical errors
thanks a milliontims over howevermanytimes i have told you thancks already
and simply put brohoof man
Hi! Its a really good story!
Interesting, but chapters are a tad short.
ya i know...sorry bout that...making a new story, longer chapters