Anonymous ends up in Equestria after a night of hard drinking. He develops relationships with some ponies. Most are platonic, but Maud seems to cling a bit.
Meh, i don't really care about the clop but still i read it :/ mostly so i can continue with the story without missing any sort of grammar mistakes, and because it shows how people think of this type of thing! (As i might have mentioned to some friends of mine, i am an anti-sexual, which means i want no part in doing that sort of thing, secondly, i like to be anti-social, which has no relevance to this situation whatsoever)
7294259 Well if Ms Cake is any indication this could be one of those cases where mares outnumber males so flirting and going fast could be a bit common, plus Maud is more a mare of action rather than words if she wish to do something I imagine she just do it or say it 'for fuck sake she burn the embodiment of chaos' that demonstrated not restrictions what so ever.
Also, nice we need some love for the rock lover, she might not show it, but its looks like Anon just crack that rock, and come on don't you think it will be funny if Maud is all happy and bouncy the next day confusing everyone? (aka, she has a small smile, is whistling a happy tune and even greet some ponies with a short hug) if she is that happy she will show it the next day I'm imagine, and Pinkie could think it was because of the couch.
P.S: Twilight maaaaaaaaay had show some interest for the little pet as well, we will had to wait to see, if this turns into a harem with Maud as the alpha mare
7295105 i think of myself as a metaphorically "traveling" editor, and by that i mean i try not to say it rudely but i point out grammar and spelling mistakes (Capitalization doesn't bother me becuase it's just boring to point out over and over... And over)
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Thank you for your input!
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Something to look into. Thank you for the input!
fucken hell that was fast...i think ya should of built that up a bit more but that might just be me
Meh, i don't really care about the clop but still i read it :/ mostly so i can continue with the story without missing any sort of grammar mistakes, and because it shows how people think of this type of thing!
(As i might have mentioned to some friends of mine, i am an anti-sexual, which means i want no part in doing that sort of thing, secondly, i like to be anti-social, which has no relevance to this situation whatsoever)
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Well if Ms Cake is any indication this could be one of those cases where mares outnumber males so flirting and going fast could be a bit common, plus Maud is more a mare of action rather than words if she wish to do something I imagine she just do it or say it 'for fuck sake she burn the embodiment of chaos' that demonstrated not restrictions what so ever.
Also, nice we need some love for the rock lover, she might not show it, but its looks like Anon just crack that rock, and come on don't you think it will be funny if Maud is all happy and bouncy the next day confusing everyone? (aka, she has a small smile, is whistling a happy tune and even greet some ponies with a short hug) if she is that happy she will show it the next day I'm imagine, and Pinkie could think it was because of the couch.
P.S: Twilight maaaaaaaaay had show some interest for the little pet as well, we will had to wait to see, if this turns into a harem with Maud as the alpha mare
Just one question, Maud is always dress, was she naked in the party or did she just show herself naked in front of Anon?
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Never really paid attention to her frock, Just wanted to focus on her more as a character.
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I wanted to see things go a little faster than usual. I like shorter stories. But I get what you're saying. Thank you for your input!
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I thank you for reading it, but if you're not into that, I might not be the author for you.
7295105 i think of myself as a metaphorically "traveling" editor, and by that i mean i try not to say it rudely but i point out grammar and spelling mistakes
(Capitalization doesn't bother me becuase it's just boring to point out over and over... And over)
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Gotcha. Thanks for the input!
This pleasantly exceeded my expectations.
Sorry if i can't offer any critical insight but i have to say i enjoyed the story so far.
Hmm... a nice chapter, went by fast but eh, it was nice.
Good show.
This was so beyond beautifully sweet and spicy plus heartwarming.