Anonymous ends up in Equestria after a night of hard drinking. He develops relationships with some ponies. Most are platonic, but Maud seems to cling a bit.
7291298 Ah I see, also are you familiar with the transdimensional window theory? because if Anon talk about it with Twilight that could help her feel better or she could used to try to explain what happen.
In case you don't that theory say that what we perceive as imagination is in fact a very rare and light type of perception or vision. Basically means that when someone imagined he or she is actually seeing another dimension, and watching its inhabitants, how they lived, its blurry and its never 100% aquared so what they creator made could had being just a vision that she had throw the ponies dimension.
Something similar in an animated show call 'Justice League'
Vaguely interesting concept and a very "go with the flow" style anon, I'll keep my eye on this. My only real complaint/nugget of constructive criticism is the fact you almost exclusively tell rather than show. You just say what happens with little to no description, and that has a tendency to lead to a dull story without anything interesting to fill the gaps between dialogue. Much preferable to Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, though; at least stuff actually happens at a reasonable clip in stories written like this.
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an island is a counter that isn't connected to the wall in a kitchen. Kind've like a permanent table.
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Thank you!
Letting a lady sleep on the couch isn't very gentlemanly.
seems good so far
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I don't know if you're serious or you're trying to use innuendo. lol
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Thanks bro!
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Ah I see, also are you familiar with the transdimensional window theory? because if Anon talk about it with Twilight that could help her feel better or she could used to try to explain what happen.
In case you don't that theory say that what we perceive as imagination is in fact a very rare and light type of perception or vision. Basically means that when someone imagined he or she is actually seeing another dimension, and watching its inhabitants, how they lived, its blurry and its never 100% aquared so what they creator made could had being just a vision that she had throw the ponies dimension.
Something similar in an animated show call 'Justice League'
Vaguely interesting concept and a very "go with the flow" style anon, I'll keep my eye on this. My only real complaint/nugget of constructive criticism is the fact you almost exclusively tell rather than show. You just say what happens with little to no description, and that has a tendency to lead to a dull story without anything interesting to fill the gaps between dialogue. Much preferable to Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, though; at least stuff actually happens at a reasonable clip in stories written like this.
Hmmmm... interesting...er, hehehe,
Nicely done dude.
Oh this is getting me hooked.