You eventually return home. You live out in the middle of the countryside of Canterlot, no neighbors, nobody for about a mile. It is a simple house, two stories, the usual house for a pony and his mare, the only problem is, you don’t have one.
Not that the chances of you coming back and seeing my comment are high, but I must say that any immersion I had in the story, or care I had for your rendition of Luna was completely destroyed the moment she basically betrayed him, assaulted him, then made excuses for it with promises of sex for forgiveness. What she did was completely uncalled for, and has outright prevented me from enjoying any further part of this fic. It went from something raunchy and somewhat romantic, to hurt and betrayal in less than twelve hours, and that's not only jarring, but it paints Luna in a very dark manner. She was willing to assault him, possibly wind up with him getting arrested and assaulted by the guards, hated by Celestia because now she thinks hes some kind of pervy weirdo, and what should have caused a broken heart and a feeling of betrayal, instead just had him wondering what she had said before she abandoned him, naked and alone in the streets of Canterlot.
Enter Molestia.
765790>>765790 my thoughts exactly
766003 molestia oh god I'm loving this story aren't yo
766024 yes but its alot more detailed then most stories i read
simply amazing
oh shit.
damn
Oh shit I wonder whats going to happen next?
"you may proceed with this foreplay, or you may make your entry immediately"
I literally lol´d on this one.
Menage a trois!
*reads last sentance*Aaaaannnnnddddd.....EPIC FAIL!!!!!!
Good evening, sister. Good to see the apple does not fall far from the tree.
Well, shit shitty shit shat
Not that the chances of you coming back and seeing my comment are high, but I must say that any immersion I had in the story, or care I had for your rendition of Luna was completely destroyed the moment she basically betrayed him, assaulted him, then made excuses for it with promises of sex for forgiveness. What she did was completely uncalled for, and has outright prevented me from enjoying any further part of this fic. It went from something raunchy and somewhat romantic, to hurt and betrayal in less than twelve hours, and that's not only jarring, but it paints Luna in a very dark manner. She was willing to assault him, possibly wind up with him getting arrested and assaulted by the guards, hated by Celestia because now she thinks hes some kind of pervy weirdo, and what should have caused a broken heart and a feeling of betrayal, instead just had him wondering what she had said before she abandoned him, naked and alone in the streets of Canterlot.