• Member Since 17th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen May 12th, 2013

PillowPet


I write in my spare time. Not very good at it, and I don't plan on getting better, but as long as one person likes my creation, I'm happy with it.

Comments ( 97 )

I can see a lot of grammar errors. Also, some sentences can be shortened to simplify things.

Also, it's not first person - this style is SECOND PERSON.

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I believe it would have been wise to proofread more than once, but it's too late now.

Also, that was a typo, my mistake.

I like the use of the word soulmate, not used as much in clopfics :twilightsmile:

I'm not usually a fan of second person, but this is awesome. Good job.

Not bad... Not bad at all. :moustache:

I LIKE IT!!! You sir (or madam) are getting watched!

Enter Molestia. :trollestia:

that was pretty hpt bro/ma'am not too many Luna clopfics out there. nice work!

I've seen a story called The Night Shift by totallynotabrony
Coincidence?

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bro that gif is fucking amazing

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Argh! So many sexytimes! Good job on this clopfic, pretty dman hot if you ask me, but one question. Why does Luna keep reffering to herself as 2 ponies? Like wtf?...

I am sure i love this but not if i like it if that makes sense....

765790>>765790 my thoughts exactly

Watched jesus this story is gold

like I said HAWT.

Ah what a nice story..... Ok this is fucking brilliant

766003 molestia oh god I'm loving this story aren't yo

Ahhh... beautiful, man... beautiful... :raritystarry:

Jesus Christ molestia makes a comeback:trollestia::trollestia:

766024 yes but its alot more detailed then most stories i read

Ah what a nice story:moustache::moustache::moustache: I'm sorry cant contain the moustaches

At the other princess's room
*clop clop clop clop clop clop clop*

\0.0/ Hmm *starts eating chips* 'Every time your pelvis makes contact with hers' *COUGH* WAIT WHAT?:scootangel:

:pinkiehappy: Hahahahah! Sharing is caring :scootangel:

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Thank you, and everyone else for your compliments. :heart:

And I believe that has to do with her royal descent, I guess royalty talked that way back in "ye olde times."

simply amazing

MY GOD. Oh wait that's me.

THIS.

IS.

BRILLIANT!

A thousand salutes for you, my glorious meatbag, for providing us with this magnificent piece of written work. I salute you sir, I salute you.

Signing off.

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

765643 Wait chuck norris likes pepsi?! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

Aru

Words cannot describe it.

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I'm not sure if i like it or hate it.

oh shit.

765493 It's Luna, she uses words no-one else ever uses anymore. :pinkiesmile:

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You could always hate the fact that you like it.

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My deepest thanks to you for your salutations and praise. :twilightblush:

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You are quite welcome sir.

Now get back to writing some new magnificent pieces of literature, organic slave.

Saluting again and logging off.

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

until swiperthefox's ban is up, you will do more suffice in the meantime.

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it is nice to see you here to, justus.

Oh shit :facehoof: I wonder whats going to happen next? :trixieshiftright:

If the real world had MLP ponies in it, or if we all lived on Equestria. I would die happy! I would have new hope for humanity and I would be a happy as can be zip a di doo da guy. I'd be the human version of Pinke Pie pretty much. Sadly thats not the real world.....:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:*Cries*:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

"you may proceed with this foreplay, or you may make your entry immediately"

I literally lol´d on this one. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Tonight, my dreams will be full of.. well.. I´m just sure that they will be really good :rainbowlaugh:

Added to fav. :derpytongue2:

Seeing as I always preferred Luna over Celestia, I really enjoyed this one.

Menage a trois!

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