I write in my spare time. Not very good at it, and I don't plan on getting better, but as long as one person likes my creation, I'm happy with it.
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My internets are yours.
I can see a lot of grammar errors. Also, some sentences can be shortened to simplify things.
Also, it's not first person - this style is SECOND PERSON.
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I believe it would have been wise to proofread more than once, but it's too late now.
Also, that was a typo, my mistake.
I like the use of the word soulmate, not used as much in clopfics
I'm not usually a fan of second person, but this is awesome. Good job.
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Not bad... Not bad at all.
I LIKE IT!!! You sir (or madam) are getting watched!
Enter Molestia.
that was pretty hpt bro/ma'am not too many Luna clopfics out there. nice work!
I've seen a story called The Night Shift by totallynotabrony
Coincidence?
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bro that gif is fucking amazing
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Argh! So many sexytimes! Good job on this clopfic, pretty dman hot if you ask me, but one question. Why does Luna keep reffering to herself as 2 ponies? Like wtf?...
HAWT.
I am sure i love this but not if i like it if that makes sense....
765790>>765790 my thoughts exactly
Watched jesus this story is gold
like I said HAWT.
Ah what a nice story..... Ok this is fucking brilliant
766003 molestia oh god I'm loving this story aren't yo
Ahhh... beautiful, man... beautiful...
Jesus Christ molestia makes a comeback
766024 yes but its alot more detailed then most stories i read
Ah what a nice story I'm sorry cant contain the moustaches
Good run, good end.
At the other princess's room
*clop clop clop clop clop clop clop*
\0.0/ Hmm *starts eating chips* 'Every time your pelvis makes contact with hers' *COUGH* WAIT WHAT?
Hahahahah! Sharing is caring
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Thank you, and everyone else for your compliments.
And I believe that has to do with her royal descent, I guess royalty talked that way back in "ye olde times."
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simply amazing
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I say what oh chap! The jolly speech of the bally old times, yes indeed!
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MY GOD. Oh wait that's me.
THIS.
IS.
BRILLIANT!
A thousand salutes for you, my glorious meatbag, for providing us with this magnificent piece of written work. I salute you sir, I salute you.
Signing off.
-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge
765643 Wait chuck norris likes pepsi?! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Words cannot describe it.
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I'm not sure if i like it or hate it.
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oh shit.
765493 It's Luna, she uses words no-one else ever uses anymore.
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You could always hate the fact that you like it.
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My deepest thanks to you for your salutations and praise.
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You are quite welcome sir.
Now get back to writing some new magnificent pieces of literature, organic slave.
Saluting again and logging off.
-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge
until swiperthefox's ban is up, you will do more suffice in the meantime.
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it is nice to see you here to, justus.
damn
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Oh shit I wonder whats going to happen next?
If the real world had MLP ponies in it, or if we all lived on Equestria. I would die happy! I would have new hope for humanity and I would be a happy as can be zip a di doo da guy. I'd be the human version of Pinke Pie pretty much. Sadly thats not the real world.....*Cries*
"you may proceed with this foreplay, or you may make your entry immediately"
I literally lol´d on this one.
Tonight, my dreams will be full of.. well.. I´m just sure that they will be really good
Added to fav.
Seeing as I always preferred Luna over Celestia, I really enjoyed this one.
Menage a trois!
You win.