Is this the real life? Or is it just fantasy?

No, seriously, I find myself thinking that about me read later list quite often. Though the 7th element thing actually isn't all that common... Especially for ones that get over a 50% approval.

7198397 I know its not too terribly common, I've just found a decent amount of them while browsing lately, so I just had to make the joke. Haha.

7198422 Heh, I can give you that. Though I think there is only like one group for that, and in it are only 24 stories and... actually most of those are decently rated but there are a bunch not listed in the group that have very poor ratings.

not my main concern, but I want to ask if this has some slice of life and romance as well, since I know not every tag can be well shown together.

I read it anyway, but if you can answer my question I'm sure "when" I want to read it, since I have a few more.

7200252 Slice of Life, yes. I'm pretty sure I accidentally uploaded it with an adventure tag at first, but i went back and changed it later. Romance I can't really say. This fic is literally "I couldn't get words out for the main fan fiction I just started, so i opened a new doc and started writing, and this happened" type of thing. Nothing really is planned, besides a few scenes that came to me while writing.

7200474 that's okay, it is enough to know that it could happen, doesn't need to happen now, I don't like those "love at first sight stuff anyway.

7200479 Yeah, that's one of the reasons I may avoid it, is because those stories where its like "I've been here a week and we are in love and going to have so many kids and no one can say anything about it" annoy the hell out of me. Doesn't stop me from reading if everything else is well done, but when you have a cliche like that it just kinda kills the romance part for me. But what I was saying before is I may avoid romance specifically because I'm not so good at writing it and i don't wanna write myself into a cliche that i highly dislike.

7200479 Also I just read your most recent blog post, and you may be in for a few surprises

“my OC is a Mary Sue and knows the exact way to solve every problem ever”

ohh ohhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!, i had one of those a week before, and one with another element, but that is actually written prettxy good.

Okay I'm not exactly sure if it is the best start I had read so far, or how good exactly it is, but I "can" say that I'm pretty much satisfied with it.

Yep I think I could like it.

7200500 Well maybe in a sequel, I don't really need it, but it somehow started to be something like a part of the slice and life tag.
I don't exactly need them to focuse on each other and rarely doing anthing with others.

Not sure if you know what I mean, but it is really enough for me to know that the characters are well aware of that concept, but a good friendship is enough for now, Maybe if enough people like the way you write you can still try something later. Till then just take the time for him to get some actual friends first and I help you with telling you my opinion.

I stop for now, I forgot what I wanted to add and I'm pretty tired today.

7200500 Well maybe in a sequel, I don't really need it, but it somehow started to be something like a part of the slice and life tag.
I don't exactly need them to focuse on each other and rarely doing anthing with others.

Not sure if you know what I mean, but it is really enough for me to know that the characters are well aware of that concept, but a good friendship is enough for now, Maybe if enough people like the way you write you can still try something later. Till then just take the time for him to get some actual friends first and I help you with telling you my opinion.

I stop for now, I forgot what I wanted to add and I'm pretty tired.

7200503 Really? okay I let it be a suprise, I'm not going to remind myself of what I had said there.

As I continue down the rode,

How do you drive down a rode?

7198397

Is this the real life? Or is it just fantasy?

I thought the exact same thing!

7200720 Fixed, Thank You!

7200730 You're welcome.
Although there is now a part of me sligthly disapointed; I was hoping it to be an expression I didn't know and I was kinda looking forward to the learning experience.

I spotted a few other typos here and there, but globally, it is adequately writted, it could be a fun thing to read.

7200755 Thanks. This honestly wasn't planned, I started a story last week that has been stuck in my head for almost A year, and in planning for almost 2 months now. Released the prologue, sat down to finish chapter 1, and couldn't get words out, so I started this on a whim. Didn't really look for an editor or anything cus I literally wrote it and sub,titled it in about an hour and a half. Just kinda writing what goes through my head currently. Haha

Once you find your beat, you must then master it.

Master your beat

master beat

masturbate

I'm saying you should jack off

7200886 Bravo....

Hmmm interstinginteresting start, a bit cliche and I am unsure where this is going but I do like me the sub genre of Hie.

Write on Ye wordsmith.

7205448 It's HiE, of course it's cliche. That's part of the fun of writing it. Poking fun at it and other cliches that are so overdone it's redonculous. It's just for fun.

7205539 Well said. I shall watch and wait for what comes next.

As they pushed me through the hotel, one of the unicorn nurses floated a needle over and stuck it in my foreleg.

There is a hotel in the hospital? Fancy, but quite a poor location to take a vacation.

7206372 fixed, thanks for pointing that out! Downside of writing on an iPad, autocorrect, bane of my existence!