7684517 The forth story will be from the perspective of Twilight's friends, other then that it centered around Twilight. Sorry I haven't thought of expanding this world much, these four stories will take quite awhile to write anyway.
So when I saw the part that her parents are an angel and demon my first thought was 'Omg she's a Nephilim!' and then explanations. Honestly a lot of the text makes sense, earth ponies = dryads, pegises= skylords, etc etc..
I really like to see more of the whole history behind them, heck get some of the other mane six to come along, would be fun. Also Libi has a sister, and she's an angel... I think I know where this is going.
So, is twilight going to become the hero for the Ethereal's? Because this just became a fucking conspiracy story by my reckoning. Not that I'd mind her becoming their hero. She'd get to go around fucking all sorts of sexy Ethereal's! Who wouldn't want that?
7693279 Those last comments she made, mostly. She's keeping secrets, and the set-up is reminiscent of those stories where the main character lives their life normally until they stumble upon a person who shows them that their world is almost nothing like they thought it was. Talks or armies used against each other, blaming the ponies for everything, you see what i'm getting at?
7694366 Isn't that how it goes? Protagonist finds someone who informs them that the world isn't what they thought it was, They embark on an adventure to do something that changes the world, all the while the protagonist falls in love with their traveling companion.
I figured that since it's both sides of the Ethereals that were wronged, she'd ultimately help save them both, and become their 'hero.' Maybe Savior would be more appropriate.
7694531 Most likely, if this was a light hearted adventure story, but you seem to have forgotten that this story isn't a adventure romance story, it's a dark romance story, and shit will be going down soon
7694596 fair enough. Although I would like to point out that it is your story, and if you so wished you could change the tags to reflect the new direction you wanted to take the story.
Ferrymen.
Really?
You couldn't come up with a more obvious death-like race if you tried.
But it does make me curious what the name of their leader is.
Charon? Or is that the name of the late husband of the current leader?
7684383 Might as well, I haven't tried to disguise anyone else, demons are demons, angels are angels, dryads are dryads, reapers are reapers.
Also you'll never find out! In this story at least, since she doesn't turn on until the next one.
7684394 Plans already for a sequel, huh?
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There should be a feature to let people double-like fics.
7684430 Three actually: Corruption: Queen of the Ethereals, Corruption: Banishment, Corruption: Redemption, in that order.
7684433 Any side-stories? Interactions for other characters in the same universe?
It's a good one for it.
7684517 The forth story will be from the perspective of Twilight's friends, other then that it centered around Twilight. Sorry I haven't thought of expanding this world much, these four stories will take quite awhile to write anyway.
7684530 Fair enough.
7684394 your making a sequel to this story?
7684625 Yeah, it's in the description.
7684651 cool i was not expecting a series of this story hope the other 3 are as good of not better then this 1
So when I saw the part that her parents are an angel and demon my first thought was 'Omg she's a Nephilim!' and then explanations. Honestly a lot of the text makes sense, earth ponies = dryads, pegises= skylords, etc etc..
I really like to see more of the whole history behind them, heck get some of the other mane six to come along, would be fun. Also Libi has a sister, and she's an angel... I think I know where this is going.
That last part, where Libi cast some foreshadow, are you planning on having an all out war between Demons and Ponies, or Angles and Demons vs Ponies?
7685763 Nothing so complicated.
7686190 Aww
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So, is twilight going to become the hero for the Ethereal's? Because this just became a fucking conspiracy story by my reckoning. Not that I'd mind her becoming their hero. She'd get to go around fucking all sorts of sexy Ethereal's! Who wouldn't want that?
7692538 why would you think that?
7693279 Those last comments she made, mostly. She's keeping secrets, and the set-up is reminiscent of those stories where the main character lives their life normally until they stumble upon a person who shows them that their world is almost nothing like they thought it was. Talks or armies used against each other, blaming the ponies for everything, you see what i'm getting at?
7694114 I can see how'd you see that, but I was wondering how you think Twilight will become hero of Ethereals.
7694366 Isn't that how it goes? Protagonist finds someone who informs them that the world isn't what they thought it was, They embark on an adventure to do something that changes the world, all the while the protagonist falls in love with their traveling companion.
I figured that since it's both sides of the Ethereals that were wronged, she'd ultimately help save them both, and become their 'hero.' Maybe Savior would be more appropriate.
7694531 Most likely, if this was a light hearted adventure story, but you seem to have forgotten that this story isn't a adventure romance story, it's a dark romance story, and shit will be going down soon
7694596 fair enough. Although I would like to point out that it is your story, and if you so wished you could change the tags to reflect the new direction you wanted to take the story.
7696046 I could, but I have no real wish to do so though.
Wow what I assumed was an interesting clop fic has now become a very interesting story. I'm pleasantly surprised.