Twilight has a problem only a demon can help with. But unknown to Twilight, this demon may be her only salvation from Corruption!
Get an editor, please.
Lot of mistakes to point out.
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7125375I was joking. Don't worry.
Except for this, though.
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Rule of Thumb: Don't do that. It breaks immersion for the reader.
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Get an editor, please.
Lot of mistakes to point out.
Ohhh
7125375
I was joking. Don't worry.
Except for this, though.
Rule of Thumb: Don't do that. It breaks immersion for the reader.
While