As I come to all I feel is cold. Cold wind, cold ground, cold steal on my neck... wait what was that last one. with that my eyes snap open and I do a mental check of whats going on. First, I'm pined under a piece of steal, second the ground is covered in snow, third, a very angry looking smoke monster is starring me in the face.
"The poor dear is over here Princess!" I hear Rarity yell out as the piece of the train we were riding is lifted of off me. "Are you OK darling?"
"Why is there smoke that looks like somebody insulted his favourite hockey team starring me down?" and why was that the first thing I asked, why not 'How the fuck are you able to lift a giant ass piece of a train like its paper?' well I guess I can ask her that after we beat up the smoke guy.
Before she can answer my question, a very familiar Claymore fly's past us and right through the smoke guy, somehow making the airborne ash bleed a strange black blood. As we look at Pinkie she waves at us, the Claymore somehow still on her back, and says "No time, just run, 5 kilometres this way!" she then proceeds to do just that. me and Rarity start to follow when suddenly the world slows to a crawl, and I find myself past Pinkie, who was a good 200 meters away when I started, before I rapidly stop, the two women staring at me in shock before I remember a key fact. The red Dino Ranger is a speedster, meaning I now have his powers, aka, I have super speed. In a flash I'm beside Rarity, with Pinkie beside me after I garbed her arm on my way past.
"Hold on to your touks ladies. I'll get us their in a blink of an eye, oh and sorry about the whiplash in advance." and with that the world slows to a crawl once more as we move, picking up the rest of the group on our way to the destination. in what seems like a second to them all we are at the gates of a city of jewels.
"OK, we NEED to have a race some time. You ma be the only being that can keep up with me." OK I think Smarties is a smidgen argent.
"We can talk of witch of thee is faster later Rainbow Dash, for now we must find find The Crystal Heart."
"I'll hold Smokey's attention well you do that Luna. the rest of you pick witch of us you're going with because I do not think any of you are the kind to sit idle well others need help." man am I glad I practice this sort of stuff in my room back home before Comic con.
after we had split the final groups were; Luna, Fluttershy, Twilight, and Spike as the ones heading out to fin the Crystal Heart, and Me, Smarties, Rarity, and AJ on smoke stopper duty. Pinkie had decided to go and see if anyone was in need of help in the city we had found. after we wished each other luck on our respective tasks my group head back out into the snow.
"So whats the plan darling? How shall we stop this beast."
"No clue, the plan is more to stall him, give Luna and the rest time to find this Crystal Heart in hopes it can stop him."
"Basically, we all signed up to be a distraction then?"
"Yes, yes you did. But hopefully we can find a way to at least keep that thing away from the city..."
"Let me guess, just in case Pinkie was right on their being civilians, right sugar cube?"
"Correct AJ, now I just hope I got more than the speed. otherwise this is gonna just look stupid."
"DINO THUNDER, POWER UP!"
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Personally I stopped watching after Samurai, but that was mostly just because of how the basically just re used the original series theme song and the bulls from the Mighty Morphing days.
LOTS of typos but other than that a good chapter
7711435 I recommend watching the rest of the seasons. The Megaforce ones are ok but Dinocharge is Awesome and Judd Lynn worked on it like In Space and Wild Force.
7711494 if you mean that I spell things differently from Americans that's because I'm Canadian. If not that just point them out and I'll fix them
Good start looking forward to see how it continues
ok, the red ranger power is superspeed, but the story goes a bit too fast with the pacing
no, seriusly, the last 2 chapter are a crescendo from an already fast pacing. there is a lot of potential tho.
7725036 Sorry about that. This is my first story so I'm still learning how to write proper pacing. Hopefully I will improve in time and likely go back to edit the earlier chapters. Again sorry for any trouble this may cause anyone when reading my story.
This, I like it, Another!!!!!
7735686 working on one
7735882 I agree more please and keep me posted
In the Author's Note, you say "as a Canadian myself, I am not sorry for this." But, as a Canadian, aren't you always sorry?
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as my editor, shouldn't you be helping me fix all the mistakes in all thes chapters?
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I'm your editor for your other story, Snake of Kirigakure. Editing this story was not part of the contract.
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take a look throu the story, I am sure you 'll change your mind
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Or I'll die of a heart attack.
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possibly
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So, I'd rather not take that chance, thanks.
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verry nice thing to say to your friend who is literally siting beside you as we added all these comments, Maz.
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Makes you wonder why we aren't just talking to each other directly. Ignoring the fact that you don't feel like talking today for whatever reason.
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mmhm