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7242528 Thank you very much! I'm really proud of the way the prologue came out-- I added it during my period of wrangling over what to do about Chapter 1, which is unfortunately very info-dump/expository at the moment. I hope the transition won't be too jarring; Chapter 2 is muscleworship and loving domination so I can at least promise the slog is worth it. ^^;;
I'm currently in the process of rewriting Chapter 1 to be from Twilight's point of view and remove the exposition, most of which I'll be trying to just seed at more natural points or put in a blog post. ^^;; The new version of that chapter should be up by this weekend if you'd prefer to wait for it to show up, but the plot basics won't be changing.
7253106 Gah! Fixed. Thank you so much.
7253129
Excellent! Beginning read now.
7253721 Thank you very much! It's with the editors, so it should be ready shortly.
7253725
Are the old chapters going to be deprecated, or is there literary merit to going through them?
7256672 There's going to be some slight tweaks for readability to the others, but they will primarily remain the same. :)
7257360
I meant the original 'learning the grounds,' but I'm just waiting for the go-ahead to blaze through the rest.
7258821 Oh, that. Some of the worldbuilding will be taken out, it's not really necessary to the story and I may put it up as a blogpost later, and chapter 1 part 2 is currently being re-written to be exclusively from Twilight's POV, but she can read him pretty easily.
7258855
Then after that, it's a straight shot through to where you've paused so far?
7258964 Yes. I will be cleaning some things up but the events won't be changing.
...I have moved this to the bookshelf entitled 'trickle down fiction' now. One may read the description to know what this entails. Believe me when I write, that this story has thus far 'inspired a trickle' in the same way Hurricane Katrina made New Orleans 'a mite damp'!
I wish, so fervently, for this 'hunt' to continue, that I am left, well and truly, shivering with antici...
7277155 SAY IT!
Cough. One does not get a degree from UC Santa Cruz without being Rockyed.
Oh, this will be continued. My buffer doc goes from the prologue to chapter 37 so far, and I'm continuing to write. Thank you very much for your kind words and patience with the time it took to rewrite.
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No prob, TB! And don't ruin the joke. You will get your punchline when I've read the next chapter.