Ariontus may have had made a blundered choice in voicing his claimed glory, angering the Blood God a being sent to a strange hell like no other... Though, he managed to make friends with a rather shy equine creature, making a living himself. Though,
“I mean, I get the peaceful vibe, and everything, but seriously! Being all prissy happy, go lucky, all the time must get boring!” He stopped himself, rethinking what he just said. A single thought appeared in his mind. “Did I just get G Rated!?”
Just down right hilarious! But I found a few mistakes. One of them is that you from time to time forget a letter of a word. It didn't happen to often but it just caught my eye. Over all, I can see a bright future for this story. Good job mate, I'll drop a like and a fav. Good luck with writing.
Absolutely bucking hilarious!
Hansel and Gretal referance
Just down right hilarious! But I found a few mistakes. One of them is that you from time to time forget a letter of a word. It didn't happen to often but it just caught my eye.
Over all, I can see a bright future for this story.
Good job mate, I'll drop a like and a fav. Good luck with writing.
7081986 .... I blame my fast typing, keyboard doesn't always read it xD
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I know the struggle xD