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I wonder if it was a bad idea to post chapters 5-19 in one day?
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Peewee is Spike's pet, which he acquired after "Dragon Quest".
818757 I see. So I did miss something! Thanks for pointing that out. I actually lost the notes I took for that part, they were going to have an impact on the story, but now, for TGE life of me, I can't remember. So I'm going back and taking out that part of the story. And no matter what I do, I can never find the mistakes in my writing when I know something is wrong. It's a bad habit, and because of it, I can't find mistakes easily. If you ever find anything else wrong with this fic, please do tell me. So maybe I can find them!
827861 I've watched all the episodes actually. It's just my memory. I forget things, almost anything that isn't burned into memory, in a snap. Which is why I'm trying as hard as I can with my fics. But the big thing in here with Fimfiction, is that when I upload a chapter, all the bolds, italics, and underlines disappear, so I have to redo them all over. Needless to say, after the first four chapters, I was tired and from being hunched over for so long... Yeah. So I only do the basics now. If you want to see all the bolds and italics, just click the link to my fanfiction page. Easy. :P btw, I also went back and read my story again. The only mistakes I caught were BigMac/AJ/AB/Beau/Braeburn talk. If that's the mistakes you were hinting at, I'm not changing those. They're there to try and emphasize how the Apples talk. If that's NOT what you were hinting at... Then I better read it all again. Oh well! More reading time!
834456 Hey. There's nothing wrong with what you said. Everypony is entitled to their opinions/criticism/or whatever they call it. I'm glad to just have somepony read my fic, albeit its not the best one out there. Sex does come in later, and gore was explained in the latest chapter. Gore will take a little while to come, but when it comes, you would be happy, cause I'm merciless. The whole point of the beginning, is to build relationships, and see how all the ponies are holding up all bottled up inside the Palace. Also, I put the sex and gore tags because I want to be safe. They're warnings. I've already thrown a small Gryffin boy off a mountain and tore open his wing. But I digress, it's your choice to or to not read a fic. I won't force you. All I'm doing is just explaining it for you so far. Hope one day you'll come back and pick up where you left off, since I do that sometimes with long fics. Anyway, thanks for the reads so far, and have a nice day!
845449 Now, now... No need call people out. I don't want anypony to fight with eachother. Though, I do appreciate you defending the story.
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Wow, you must be the nicest person in the world. You just take criticism so well! I hope your story turns out just how you want it to!
-Weatherstorm
849036 The key is this. If faced with a problem, ask yourself.. "What Would Fluttershy Do?" Plus, I'm naturally like this. So it's the first thing I think of when faced with criticism. Critics would respect you better if you accept their criticism and try to learn from their words.
Just Read all 20 chapters. Do you have any idea how good the fight scene between Celestia and Lunar is if you read it while listening to 'Up is Down' From the Pirates of the Carribean 3 Soundtrack? Best. Thing. Ever! Also, this story is pretty Darn good. At first I read it because of the title, But I don't really get how it fits. Still, This is a Really awesome Fic. Keep Writing! DON'T YOU DARE STOP!
1054298 It's called the Seventh Element because it refers to the elements of Life, which are like the elements of harmony. Except for the elements of life to work, they need the seventh element. If you got anymore questions, I'll be happy to answer, within reason. Thank you for reading, and I'll try to post the next chapter very soon.
Ah, Okay, It's like magic... Cool