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Could that be considered a kind of 'team-building exercise'?
I feel that Dusk is getting the short end of the stick in the story so far. Twilight is getting everything she wanted and Dusk seems to have resigned himself to believe there is nothing for him.
I'm curious what will happen when Dusk learns Luna still want to be with him (and that Celestia may also be interested in him). Will he start to fight with Twilight to be with Luna while Twilight wants to be with Mac?
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You have raised a very good point, and yes I admit it does seem like he's getting the short end of the stick like you said. So I'm just going to point one thing out as a bit of a tease. Like Twi has said she and Dusk are two sides of the same coin and they influence each other without realising it. I'm very sure you caught a few moments when Twi is acting like Dusk and the other way round.
It's one of the reasons I wrote this from Dusk and Twi's persective in 1st person, so the reader wasn't entirely sure which of the two was the dominant side at the present time.
7190272 next few chapters please that is if u can to do so that is
This is awesome! So funny!
Okay, I managed to follow it... barely. The jumping personalities is starting to get a bit confusing. Oh well. It's a good story regardless, so I'll live.