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New cover art. Nice.
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I'm glad you like it, I figured the story could use a new cover art. I'm more of an artist than a writer but it's nice to be able to bring both together.
7234194 next few chapters please
Love it
Love the story dude, awesome work :) /) just a quick suggestion. Towards the beginning of this chapter, you have Dusk explain to Mac what the doctor told him in regards to him being able to change back, but being pointless to try. However, Dusk had already explained this to Mac on the train ride in the previous chapter. It's kinda redundant to repeat it, otherwise it's an awesome chapter as always. Keep up the good work :)
I thought Fluttershy did find out?