Can't wait to see the reasoning behind Twilight getting the Library later on. I really have to commend you sir and/or madam This is the first fic with a male homosexual main character, that I've read so far, that didn't make a big deal about said character's sexual preference. Unless you plan on changing that. Another thing, is Fluttershy Karma's literal sister, as in her family legally adopted him, or is she like a sister to him? Because if it's the second, then the whole crush thing would be a lot less creepy
7006472 Sorry bought that, I have a problem with pacing ><
7007508 Oh my god I am so glad you like it! And he thinks of her as a sister because he grew up with Fluttershy, Pinkie, somepony else, and Rarity and is thought of as a brother by all of them: when they were young. Now though, they are mares. Thanks again for liking my shitty story
So far it's a great start, I love how you worked it out. Even gave Fluttershy a nice little day dream. Though I was ill prepared for when it switched over to him and Big Mac, when I realized what happened this was my reaction.
Don't get me wrong I still found it interesting to read, it just caught me off guard. Well played, very well played.
This seems a bit rushed, but it's pretty good overall.
Can't wait to see the reasoning behind Twilight getting the Library later on. I really have to commend you sir and/or madam This is the first fic with a male homosexual main character, that I've read so far, that didn't make a big deal about said character's sexual preference. Unless you plan on changing that. Another thing, is Fluttershy Karma's literal sister, as in her family legally adopted him, or is she like a sister to him? Because if it's the second, then the whole crush thing would be a lot less creepy
7006472 Sorry bought that, I have a problem with pacing ><
7007508 Oh my god I am so glad you like it! And he thinks of her as a sister because he grew up with Fluttershy, Pinkie, somepony else, and Rarity and is thought of as a brother by all of them: when they were young. Now though, they are mares.
Thanks again for liking my shitty story
Oh shit. Not my mojo, not my mojo.
Noone noticed the blue word in there?
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Pretty sure it spelled Cold, not sure what that means in context, but I'll bet we find out when Twi is supposed to arrive.
So far it's a great start, I love how you worked it out. Even gave Fluttershy a nice little day dream. Though I was ill prepared for when it switched over to him and Big Mac, when I realized what happened this was my reaction.
Don't get me wrong I still found it interesting to read, it just caught me off guard. Well played, very well played.