Also I was watching Adventure Time and realized that Marceline's problem song could work well for a twidash songfic, but i'm not one to do songfics so i'm gonna post the lyrics. rainbow being marceline, twilight princess bubblegum
"Sorry I don't treat you like a goddess, Is that what you want me to do? Sorry I don't treat you like you're perfect, Like all your little loyal subjects do, Sorry I'm not made of sugar, Am I not sweet enough for you? Is that why you always avoid me? That must be such an inconvenience to you, Well... I'm just your problem, I'm just your problem, It's like I'm not even a person, am I? I'm just your problem"
"they're not cute *aah*" but was cut off by her own gasp as she felt Twilight nibble on her ear. Rainbow would be a liar if she said that wasn't one of the best things she's felt in her life.
If she thought that felt good, wait until she feels “other” things.
I am going straight to Hell for that comment. But it's not like I won't know anybody.
"Good, that's just the way I like it" Twilight said before swinging her hoof around Dash's neck and pulling them both back into bed. Dash sighed dreamily as she felt Twilight wrap her hooves and wing around her belly and lift her hindleg over onto Dash's. She felt completely safe, cuddling with her marefriend knowing that nothing bad would happen if she had her back. "I love you, Rainbow" Twilight said as she let her head rest in the crane of Rainbow's neck which the pegasus had no objection to "love you too Twilight". Everything was just right up until "you're just too cute Dashie" Twilight grinned "alright don't push it Twilight..." Dash humphed.
You need to start a new paragraph every time a new character talks
Also I was watching Adventure Time and realized that Marceline's problem song could work well for a twidash songfic, but i'm not one to do songfics so i'm gonna post the lyrics. rainbow being marceline, twilight princess bubblegum
"Sorry I don't treat you like a goddess,
Is that what you want me to do?
Sorry I don't treat you like you're perfect,
Like all your little loyal subjects do,
Sorry I'm not made of sugar,
Am I not sweet enough for you?
Is that why you always avoid me?
That must be such an inconvenience to you,
Well... I'm just your problem,
I'm just your problem,
It's like I'm not even a person, am I?
I'm just your problem"
Nice stories, but check the use of "your" and "you're"
7005195 I'd like to see that :)
"they're not cute *aah*" but was cut off by her own gasp as she felt Twilight nibble on her ear. Rainbow would be a liar if she said that wasn't one of the best things she's felt in her life.
If she thought that felt good, wait until she feels “other” things.
I am going straight to Hell for that comment. But it's not like I won't know anybody.
You need to start a new paragraph every time a new character talks