Soldiers of Fortune
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"THIS IS BULLSHIIIIT"
Best line ever
I really suggest either getting a good document program with grammar and sentence checks, and maybe also a good editor. Throughout this chapter alone there were either sentences with odd structure, run on sentences., and incomplete sentences. Too much to try to point out in a review. Plus that was only what I noticed.
Anyway, I will still give this story a chance. I would like to see where this goes.
Hope you have fun writing.
This sounds like an interesting story so far, I wonder were your going to take this story too
I completely agree!
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Yup.
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I mean, you're not wrong