Rarity slowly realizes that she has an unappreciated attraction towards children, and she tries to come to terms with it with the help of friends, books and experiences.
Well you already know my view on the story, but still reading it now was still as good as when I first looked at it, and that's coming from someone who doesn't like diaper stuff.
Anyway I'm glad you've managed to get it allowed on here. I can't wait to see how Rarity will deal with this over the coming chapters.
Also I'll admit, it was really cool seeing an image by me on a fic in my feed
This is a very promising first chapter. Though it needs some editing, the language is intelligent and pleasant to read outside of the errors. I love the premise and the depth we see in Rarity's mental struggle. She's really very relatable, and reading her thoughts is very insightful. The pacing feels very natural and hooks my interest well so far.
I'm also a fan of padded females, so that's a bonus for me, though maybe it's created some problems for other readers. Still, I think this story deserves much higher voting, especially if it manages to be polished more thoroughly through editing. I'll see if I can help in that regard.
I look forward to finishing the next chapter as soon as my schedule permits.
Excellent story! I'm excited to see where this one goes! Are you going to write more?
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Yes, I shall write more.
6816869 Yay!!!!!!! I'm super excited to see where this goes!!!!! Good luck!!!
Well you already know my view on the story, but still reading it now was still as good as when I first looked at it, and that's coming from someone who doesn't like diaper stuff.
Anyway I'm glad you've managed to get it allowed on here. I can't wait to see how Rarity will deal with this over the coming chapters.
Also I'll admit, it was really cool seeing an image by me on a fic in my feed
Has science gone to far....
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And done what, if you do not mind me asking?
This is a very promising first chapter. Though it needs some editing, the language is intelligent and pleasant to read outside of the errors. I love the premise and the depth we see in Rarity's mental struggle. She's really very relatable, and reading her thoughts is very insightful. The pacing feels very natural and hooks my interest well so far.
I'm also a fan of padded females, so that's a bonus for me, though maybe it's created some problems for other readers. Still, I think this story deserves much higher voting, especially if it manages to be polished more thoroughly through editing. I'll see if I can help in that regard.
I look forward to finishing the next chapter as soon as my schedule permits.