Red Sky At Morning
Yafid cleaned off his talons with one of the cloths sitting around the room. He always hated being dirty, which was ironic, given his career field.
He had been out of commission for three weeks. It would have been longer, had he not gotten lucky and found himself under the care of unicorn doctors from far to the west. They were out there for some service mission or some such nonsense.
Yafid simply had to buy his time until he was well enough to leave today. When he went to leave, they tried to take records of who he was and what he did, but he refused to give them the information. They tried to tell him they couldn’t let him leave until he told them what they were asking; if only they had an inkling of knowledge of who he was.
He didn’t feel like taking their nonsense, and so dealt with them as he pleased. He knew they had medical supplies and money that he could use, and so he took them without too much effort. They didn’t have guards, so when the doctors tried to fight back, it was easy for Yafid to take them down.
The town he was residing in never even heard the short struggle; Yafid was just too good at what he did to let them make a fuss. The town would find out eventually, but he would be long gone by the time that happened.
It was sad, really; had the young man not done what he did to Yafid and his stallions, these doctors might still be alive. The young man took his team, his friends, from him, when all he had to do was just surrender and prevent the unnecessary violence. The more he thought about it, the angrier Yafid became.
He was intent on taking that young man. Maybe he wouldn’t sell him; maybe he wouldn’t even keep him. But he was going to take that young man’s life from him, and he was going to enjoy it when he did.
Of course, given how long it had been, it would take time to find the young man. It wouldn’t be hard, of course; how easily could a travelling human hide from the public eye? It was just a matter of actually getting to him after his three week head start.
But that was what Yafid loved about this job; the chase, the pursuit of his prey was just too exciting not to get him going. And he knew the Tong wouldn’t have succeeded; it was just meant to delay him for a day or two. He knew the chase was still very much on.
With a heart of black and eyes of ice, Yafid left the building and the dead inside and flew off to pursue his revenge against the young man who had done so much damage to him.
Human magically transported to Equestria. Human magically able to handle an edgy new threat the canon characters cannot.
At least the WF protagonist doesn't romance one of the horses. Props for deviation on that HiE front.
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The canon characters aren't adults yet, that rainbow shockwave was the sonic rainboom. This takes place before the canon show right now.
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It's the first one, no secret there
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I like to think he was so calm just because his body went into shock and he wasn't really registering what was happening. I tried to make him seem sluggish and not quite there.
7017729 It reminds me of an anime plotline, although that might just be the martial arts.
7041018 I gave up on anime in general. Seeing that tired cliche play out over and over again just became too much.
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7040290
I don't see how that conclusion of Colm selling out the village was made, makes no sense to me.
Pheew, it was sure hard to read (no, it wasn't) but I made it and know I know that your story will be wonderful and people will truly like it, I just know that! Well, I'm wishing you good luck and Peace!
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No one can be perfect, after all. The human just might have certain personality flaws where he doesn't completely think about things...