Well, see, Pinkie, yours in particular is a bad example, being a Flash cartoon. . . . Absolutely loved the Pinkie and Twilight interactions in here, among other things. I don't know why you worry about this chapter being an infodump when it's entertaining!
Rainbow, I know how much she means to you. If you two have another fight the damage to our local space-time could be catastrophic! And if you fix your problem, Celestia help us all. Your childhood sweetheart make-up sex could literally tear both universes apart!
Um... here's an idea. Why not just not have any make-up sex? There are ways of showing affection and forgiveness other than doing the in-and-out, you know. Unless the hole in space-time is so fragile that any kind of affection could potentially jeopardise it, I fail to see the issue here.
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Ponies going crazy. Not at all overdone in the main series!
Well, see, Pinkie, yours in particular is a bad example, being a Flash cartoon. . . .
Absolutely loved the Pinkie and Twilight interactions in here, among other things. I don't know why you worry about this chapter being an infodump when it's entertaining!
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Fumbles TV Tropes open to Literary Agent Hypothesis entry.
Frantically pushes laptop towards you with hooves.
But thank you! :D
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What this guy said!
Man... I was beginning to like the MRD... Oh well.
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Allow me to say the same of 6741230, friend! Prudent comment; thanks for giving honest feedback!
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And thanks to Cerulean for saying what I am sometimes too grump to say. Yes. Honest feedback is good. Even if it makes me grumpy.
Still figuring out the action thing TBH. Writing is hard!
Twilight paused as a strange shudder abruptly passed through the room, as if the universe itself was suddenly flexing.
"YEAH!!!" came a distant-yet-thunderous shout, from a direction strangely orthogonal to the usual.
Blinking once, Twilight shook her head. "Ahem. As I was saying..."
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I know. Twilight was, too!
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Hey, Cerulean, you missed one!
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Got it, thanks.
Um... here's an idea. Why not just not have any make-up sex? There are ways of showing affection and forgiveness other than doing the in-and-out, you know. Unless the hole in space-time is so fragile that any kind of affection could potentially jeopardise it, I fail to see the issue here.
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More on that in the next chapter. But yeah, Twi is, in fact, being really Twi about this whole thing.