Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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So chapter 6 is out and I hope you enjoy it!
And with this, I have run out of material that had been reviewed by my old editor/proofreader.
That being said, I am looking for a new proofreader to help me review new material. Mainly, I'd need someone who could help me pick up stuff like characters acting oddly/out of character, inconsistencies with canon, general flow/readability, things like that.
If you are interested, please PM me. I figured I would try this first and find someone already interested in the story before going to the forums.
Hey! Just finished the chapter a while ago and wanted to say, I love the way you're going with this story. You seem to have a lot more original problems for your characters, and I like that. I also wish I could help with the proofreading, but I would not be very good at it, since when I read I don't really pay attention to typos and such often. So, best of luck then? I hope you find a proofreader soon.
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I struggled with the lack of firearms competence for the protagonist also... however, since the idea originally came from an episode of Star Trek : TNG where a bunch of scientists were hiding in a cloaked observation station, so I figured it wouldn't be too much of a stretch. Also, Dust's partner was the better of the two, so the team together would seem more well-rounded. Of course, no one expected that Muddy would turn against Dust, so there is that
I'm glad you see promise so far and I hope the rest can keep it up.
Thanks
Just though I'd give my few follows an update, as well as let everypony else know what's going on.
I have just started working with a new editor (Setokaiva) and I must say he is remarkable if I say so myself. We are currently working through the previously released work to make necessary changes.
Anypony who has read the work already, you aren't missing much, but it may be worth going back through for a second read. New readers, you aren't missing anything, but this will explain why there is such a delay between chapter 6 and chapter 7.
Currently, only the Prologue has been re-uploaded. I will be reuploading chapter 1 soon and we are on chapter 2 as I write this.
Again, thanks for your interest and I hope you like it!
Okay everypony!
Chapter 1 has been updated... again, no major changes, just a lot of tweaks to make things look and flow better. A few of the more glaring inconsistencies have been addressed as well.
Enjoy it!
7019286 Hey Fair Play, thanks for the update! I was wondering how things were going, nice to see that things are back on track!
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I'm glad to be back on track! I just can't wait to finish some much needed work on the first set of chapters and then finally get new material out there.... I have so many ideas!
Hopefully it's sooner rather than later.
Wow that got pretty dark fast.
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I hope I didn't turn you off from the fic. I did it mostly to show a virtue that One had (virtues will be a major theme of the story) He saved Dust from having to do it himself.
Hopefully, this wasn't enough to ruin it for you.
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7062944 Nope
Just making an observation
Good fanfic so far, yeah, finally got around to reading it.
So followers.... a little bit of bad news...
My current editor has become really focused on other projects with which he had already been involved. Unfortunately, this will bring my fic to a temporary stop until I find a new editor. While I look on my own, if anypony is either interested or knows of anypony able to take on a project, please have them PM me.
Otherwise, I will hopefully find a new editor soon and get my story back on track.
Good news everypony!
With the encouragement of somepony, I got reinvigorated to keep writing!
I am almost done with chapter 7 and will be having that somepony I found to help me out a little and pre-read before I post. I hope to have it out before the end of the week, but it all depends on when I can put my finishing touches on it and how long it takes to get it reviewed.
Fear not! Chapter 7 is coming!