Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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Aww, love in the wasteland, so cute.
Also nice MGS shout-out with the perk.
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Dust is in denial. (I probably should have more explicit with that, introspection is one thing I need to improve upon with my writing).
He still thinks he's going home at some point and he doesn't really believe Muddy or Midnight at this point.
Hopefully this inadvertent discrepancy is not large enough to turn you off to the rest of the fic.
Thanks for the feedback though!
Alright! A little late, but I finished this chapter, this was a fun chapter to read, with Dust pulling some MGS tactics there. But finally! Dust isn't crushing his chances at having anything with Silver! But I seriously liked this chapter, It had an original sort of conflict. (Slaver dude that turns out to not be a Slaver and just an asshole) But yeah all in all it was a nice chapter, thank you for writing this awesome story!
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Sorry for taking so long to respond.
Thanks for the feedback! This was probably my favorite chapter to write so far. Probably because I knew this was the chapter that Dust was finally going to stop getting in his own way.
I'm glad you're still liking the story and I hope to keep your interest. The next chapter should be ready today or tomorrow (hopefully). I am just giving it one more read-through to make sure everything is just the way I want it to be!
FINALLY he kisses her, bout time the idiot lol