Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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Perks Obtained:
Full Team:
Noble Sacrifice: "Don't forget me..." - You gain +10 HP due to the noble sacrifice of your numbered comrade
Silver:
Long Jump: "Able to leap slightly long distances in a few bounds" - +1 AGI when jumping
Dust:
Awesome Stranger: "You have assistance from someone truly more awesome than you" - Adds special content to your gaming experience
Muddy:
Skin Deep Beauty: "I wouldn't touch you with a 39 and a half foot pole" - +30% Persuasion with those you don't know, -30% Persuasion with those who know your true identity
Psychopath: "Try getting a reservation at Dorsia's now you fucking stupid bastard! Ahhh!" - You have the emotional depth of a kiddie pool, but you certainly make for a cold killer +10 in all weapons skills
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As always, you've outdone yourself with the perks. At least I was able to get a little chuckle out of the references for Muddy.... And the one you made for One for the full team, made a tear come to my eye, but in a good way.
Thanks for that!
This was an amazing chapter," but still sad none the less. One was funny and added more life to the group, and it's really sad to see him go... Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. R.I.P. One, You will be missed.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, even with the sad ending. It was hard to write, probably harder than it was to read. I will miss One also, but now Dust has even more (and reignited) motivation to get Muddy.
Here's to One!
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I'm glad you are enjoying it so far (even if it is a little predictable lol). And that is a very apropos shirt for Muddy!
I hope as you continue the story, it keeps your interest!
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Thanks for the comment. I assume you are enjoying it and I thank you for taking your time to read it!