Feeling better, Rarity was at her sewing machine putting the final touches on a tarp she had been working on.
"Alright!" she said to herself. "That's two blankets, five coats, three pillow cases, two half mattresses, one tent, three tarps, two saddle bags. seven hats- very stylish hats I might add." She said with a giggle. "And one red dress, finished with flowers, glitter, rolls, ruffles, and folds, for me to wear when we reach... wherever we are going." She went to her makeshift fabric holder station, which she made quickly, refusing to put anything on the floor, and put her hoof to her chin. "Hmm... What should I make next?" She asked herself. "Ooooh I know! I'll make shoooes!"
She picked up a template from one of the cupboards and some high quality fabrics with her magic. She went back to her sewing machine and started on the first pair. She started humming a tune to herself when suddenly there was a loud crack, and immense pain in the back of her head. She collapsed on the floor, hoofs grabbing at the place where the pain came from. Her vision was blurry, her mind was in shambles, and everything was going black. The last thing she saw before she blacked out was a giant, evil smile, with pink lips.
***
Twilight Sparkle, Apple Jack, and Rainbow Dash were running, trying to get to the library as quickly as they could, knowing they needed to leave as quickly as possible to Canterlot, to hopefully prevent its destruction.
"I hope Rarity isn't completely fed up with Pinkie Pie by now." Rainbow Dash pointed out.
"I miss the old Pinkie Pie." Twilight said. "All she ever does now is cry, we could have really used her for our own sanity right now."
"Ya'll can't blame her." Apple Jack criticized. "She finally found something she couldn't laugh off, she's just realizing all the real dangers in the world. She'll come around eventually.
"Hopefully sooner than later," Twilight agreed. "But until then, we need to stick together, if anyone had any problem with anything, we need to talk to that person about it, no matter how simple or severe it is." She looked over her shoulder. "Right, Rainbow Dash?"
Rainbow Dash blushed and looked away in embarrassment. "I guess." She said simply.
Twilight smiled, and looked back ahead of her. "Good!" she called out satisfied. "But we should slow down now, we're getting close to the library, and there might be some dogs there."
"Good point." Apple Jack replied.
Approaching the final corner to the library, beside what was Berry Punches house, they lined up. Apple Jack in front, Twilight behind her, and Rainbow Dash in last.
"Ah'ma look around now" Apple jack whispered to her friends, then stuck her head out. "What?" Apple Jack yelled, she walked out into the open. "There ain’t no beasties here, not a single one!"
"What!?" Twilight said in a mixture of confusion and thought. "How could that be?" Both she and Rainbow Dash walked out to where Apple Jack was. "All the noise we made, the dog calling the others, there should be plenty of them, but not even the one I shot is here."
"What do you think is happening Twilight?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"I don't know." Twilight admitted. "But I get a bad feeling it’s something big."
There was a silence, the three of them pondering what Twilight had just said.
"We should get back." Apple Jack finally said. "Rarity and Pinkie Pie're waiting for us."
"Right," Twilight agreed. "Let’s go."
Twilight opened up the barrier for the three of them to get through, and when she opened the door, what she saw nearly made her give up. Rarity was tied to the horse statue, being forced to stand on her two hind legs. Her mouth was taped, and she was sweating all over. Pinkie Pie was also on her hind hoofs, but she wasn't tied up, she leaned against the statue, holding herself up with one hoof and in her other one, she was holding a knife. She was spinning it around; the tip was touching Rarity's cheek.
"Oh good girls, you're back!" Pinkie said jumping back down to all four hoofs. "I was getting impatient." Her voice was different, it was more seductive, and womanly; it also had a murderous tone to it.
Her mane no longer had any curls to it. It was completely straight, and hung down the side of her face.
"Pinkie Pie, What are you doing?" Twilight spoke slowly.
"Oh." Pinkie said. "I am no longer Pinkie Pie. That crazy… party... pony, is gone. You may call me Pinkamina!"
"Pinkie Pie, this is..." Rainbow dash tried to speak.
"I am not Pinkie Pie!" Pinkamina said with a death stare.
"... Pinkamina..." Rainbow Dash said cautiously. "This is crazy! Let Rarity go now!"
"Oh I'm afraid I cannot do that right now." Pinkamina gave a slight grin towards Rarity, who cowered in fear.
"What d’ya mean?" Apple Jack asked. She started to walk forward."If ya just.."
"DON'T come any closer" Pinkamina hissed, and raised her hoof with the knife and pointed it at Apple Jack.
"Ah'm sorry." Apple Jack said as she backed off.
"Enough!" Twilight demanded. "What do you want!?"
"Aww," Pinkamina teased putting the knife back down. "You're no fun, can't we play a little? Maybe throw a party?"
Twilight just stared at her.
"Fine," Pinkamina sighed. "You were the most boring out of everyone, always caught up in your studies, but I guess it's just business.
"Get on with it!" Rainbow Dash demanded.
"Well for starters." Pinkamina rolled her eyes diagonally as if she was thinking to herself. "I'm going to be leaving this place, figured I would be better off alone than with a red neck, someone who's only had friends for about two years now, out of her twenty three year life," She glanced at Rainbow dash with an disapproving frown. "You, and this stuck up bitch who only knows how make pretty dresses!' Her voice got high and sarcastic. "Now!" She said with an empowered voice. "My saddle bag is right over there." She pointed beside the door. "It's packed and everything! All's I want is your sword Apple Jack. Twilight, being overly caring for her "friends" had to go and help Rainbow Dash in her time of need," She said with a over dramatized tone, “didn't get any others done. So if you give me yours, I'll be out of your hair and we can go on living what short lives we have."
"Ooooor We could tie you down and forget about all of that!" Rainbow Dash said jumping into the air.
"Uh uh uh." Pinkamina said in disappointing tone. “I wouldn't do that if I were you." she put the knife up to Rarity's throat. Rarity whined in fear in response. This brought a smile to Pinkamina's face.
"Now there's no need for that Pinkie..." Apple Jack stopped herself. "Pinkamina. Look Ah'll take the sword off now." She leaned forward, causing the sheath to slide down. When it fell off her head, she caught it by bringing her hoof up. Having it hang there she said. "Here ya go."
"Slide it over here." Pinkamina demanded.
Apple Jack followed her instructions.
"Good," Pinkamina hissed.
Pinkamina let go of Rarity, dropped the knife, and reached for the sword. Using the distraction, Rainbow Dash flew over as quickly as she could, and tackled her to the ground. Twilight cast her magic, making chains of energy, and preventing her from getting up.
"LET ME GO NOW!" Pinkamina demanded.
"Good job Rainbow Dash." Twilight complimented. "I was worried we were actually going to have let her go."
"DON'T YOU DARE IGNORE ME!" Pinkamina hopelessly ranted.
Rainbow Dash replied with a smile.
"Mmmmmm" Rarity said.
"Ah got it" Apple Jack walked over and ripped the tape off of her face, and started with the ropes that tied her down.
"You won’t believe what she did to me!" Rarity started to rant. "I was so scared! If you girls hadn't come, I don't know if I would be alive right now, my, she wouldn't even let me wash my mane, UHG, Its all filled with blood and guck..."
"Can we put the tape back on her?" Rainbow Dash interrupted.
Twilight and Apple Jack laughed, Rarity gave a look of disbelief. "HMF" She grunted as she brought her head up and to the right.
"Why'd you take it off in the first place anyways?" Pinkamina joked.
"Ha. Good one Pinkie" Rainbow Dash laughed and turned to Pinkamina, who was giving her a death stare. "Pinkamina" Rainbow Dash corrected herself.
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Ya'll better be happy, I skipped a study session for my finals just to write for you guys... Aww who am I kidding, I love it!
SHOUT OUTS!!!
Thanks to... Dartmaul15 for giving me a fav!
Special thanks to... Ponified_Dread and Skylar Dawn for watching me! (Freakin stalkers these days eh?)
super ultra mega special thanks to... SpikeThePony of FunnyJunk for proof reading this chapter!
And thank YOU for the read, I love you all!
Whoa another shout out Again thank's
Stories really good can't wait till next chapter
770690 Thanks! and I really do not keep track of the shout outs, if i get a follower or a fav and its resent i throw it in, i think i may have some repeats to lol
As I'm sure I've said millions of times, this is one of the best stories I have ever read...Can't wait for the next chapter...and thanks for the shoutout.
770833 You must not have read many stories than it can't be that good, its only my second fan fic. And not a problem! least I could do for the fav or follow (to lazy to check).
but do u think i went a little over bored with Pinkamina? She almost seems to much of a crazy to me
770886 I've read alot of stories on here, and I do mean what I said. Personally I like how crazy Pinkamina is...(not to mention the fact that my own OC is crazier than she is and I'm a little crazy myself) but so far she seems alright. Honestly I would have done the same thing she did to Rarity...tying her up I mean to get her to shut up about making clothes...
770919 If you say so, honestly though, the needs to be better writers out there than me, and a lot of them, i'm sure there are hundreds of better fic than this, just need to look harder i guess
Ha guess u dont like Rarity to much lol she can get annoying, but all RD talks about is being cool, MAKE ME MAD
Well...due to the fact my fav pony is RD I would say I disagree but unfortunantly her character is a bit cocky...ok a lot cocky at most times. Anyway I'm sure there are other writers out there, but right now this story is more interesting then looking around to find one.
in my opinion, RD is over rated, along with Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy, if you ask me, AJ is best pony! but whatever floats ur boat, And I guess i can't argue with that logic lol, also thank you for your support, it does mean a lot to me! 771185
Define "over rated" because I don't think I define it the same. I define over rated as a person, or in this case pony, who doesn't really follow a mainstream and rather beats there own path into an unknown landscape. And Your welcome
let me see if i get things straight... Pinkie wave been in pinkiemena shape for a while bineg just sad and depressed. Now she flips completely. to use AJ's phraze: didn't see that one coming
it suprised me, but on the same time i should have seen it coming. damn great work there with
i also likes how RD appears to change in the newest chapter. she really earned her element of loyalty
seriously, you did not need to mention me. all i want is you to make it the story you wanted it to be.
i just gave you a bit of support
771413 the way i'm saying it is that something has a fan base than is too large than it deserves, for example Tenacious D, or Star Wars,
Ah...well then obviously I would agree with your previous statement of over ratedness. or whatever...
771420 support is the perfect reason to mention you! My audience is the only reason why i'm writing this! without you guys this would NOT exist!
To be complete;y honest, this idea came right when i was writing this chapter, I don't ever plan anything out, I just let my hands go, and what you see is what you get, I have a feeling however that this would be a lot worse if i did plan things out, like RD recovering like that would not be there, they would never have gone to Rarity's shop, and random shit like that, the story would be less dragged out however and i'm glad RD came out as you liked, I think she's a better pony in general as well
The story I want it to be is a story that can connect with my audience, but at the same time be fucking epic, and my own, so the only way I can do that is to open up to you guys and take you in as my equals (wat) so please never think that i don't need your support or help!
771436
Wanna know something funny about me? I'm going into tenth grade when school starts, last year I took an English PSAT and scored a 1283. Due to the I should be in a Eleventh grade honors english class, I can write just about any story if I can do it on my time. Although I write stories and poems, the thing I'm best at is Rping. Infact my father wanted to copy one of my Rps to get published. Unfortunantly, the first story I posted was one I didn't mean to, so the general expectations of me from this site are obviously lowered. If any one were to read my Rp's then they would understand why I can't really do a story by myself, I kinda need someone to keep me on the right track, I get distracted very easily.
I look at everyone as an equal since I know my own limits. Biggest one is athletics...I'm large...yet I can out run alot of people, but I can't do an athletic sport without dying in the end, or craving an Rp or to write.
Also, I never plan things out either. I just allow my hands to roam across the key board and type what they want. Unfortunenatly I end up tying grimdarks that are about fourty pages long within a good twelve hours. Seems the dark side of my brain prefers to be typed.
And furthermore, I still stand by my previous statement on how I think of this story. It IS one of the best I have read (My friends get mad, 'cause I am normally reading this rather than listening to them). Also, since obviously you dont' really know my group, I have a small group of six friends, which ,obviously to me and a few others, we took to a different level. We found out which element we represent. It would be interesting if I were honesty but I'm generosity...this is not me giving a generous feedback, this is me being truthful.
Anyway, keep up the good work on the story.
771647 you write for the audience, that is a motivation...
just don't forget why you started writing. when you forget that, and write what everyone want is the time you should consider putting down the pen. never forget that. a story should firstly be written by yourself for yourself and then for the audience. if not, you might risk loosing what makes your story so great
now please, take the story where YOU want it. if we inspire you that is good, if we sugest something you don't want to do then don't do it
Death leaves a heartache
no one can heal
Love leaves a memory
no one can steal...
Friggin... Cupcakes...
I LOVE IT
>:3 I love Pinkamina.
When I showed my cousin "Party of One" yesterday
and showed him how Pinkie goes crazy, then he watched the rest
and at the end he said that he likes Pinkamina better than Pinkie Pie
Lol yeah
can't wait for more
~Rosalynn~
771953 all that first paragraph and the only thing i write to it is "Cool i'll check your shit out then!"
I know what you mean by everybody is equal, I'm 6'2, I have a huge body, but i suck balls at hockey, and even worse at football, but i am amazing at basketball lol.
ha... dark sides...
wow I never thought my story would ever go before any friend, you are actually convincing me that its good also JELLY i have one other brony friend, all my other friends are brony haters lol, there chill when i'm not being a brony though. And again, thank you don't stop giving opinions and shit like that
772099 Oh I know when to say no to someone, i think its happened once in the comments, and i kinda gave a little rage to my proof reader who thought it would be a good idea to end the story off that it was Twilight dream lol but what im saying is, I want this story to be just as much of my audiences, as it is mine, that is also why i do the shout outs
774393 you said it best lol yeah and pinkamina is pretty awesome.
776309 I'm 5'9" The only thing I'm good at is football...defense or something.
what hapened to the update? i got a maile 15h back about the story being updated, but the newest chapter is from the 19th of june
did you remove it? if so: i WANT IT NOW
seriously, i can't wait to read it
801899 i'm sorry, i did upload it, BUT it was fucking terrible, like really really bad, i wrote it at 3 am and... just fuck it was bad, i'm re writing it completely, i'll finish it off tonight than run it through my proof reader again, again sorry but I just needed to do this for all of us
805166
see that one. better to wait a few days than uploading something that is not good enough
keep writing
EDIT: seriously, this is annoying. another warning about an update. what the buck? the chapter can't be that bad!