What happens when a military Brony suddenly dies and wakes up in Equestria? Follow the adventures of Steven! Your average military Brony who dies and gets a chance at a new life in Equestria.
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This is NOT A SELF INSERT!
I am nothing like Steven. You're being ridiculous and cruel.
still confused
I can say this is not the best work I have read but it has potential. As I was reading there was things that didn't make any sense but I thoroughly found it entertaining. Even with all the inconsistencies in some of the silly writing. I think the time and you continuing your skill in writing stories you'll become a fine writer. Don't take the criticisms too seriously but absorb what they had to say. I was able to pretty much crunch this in about 8 hours. But that's making sidetracked continue your writing try new things and improve. But you have found a fan who's willing to look at your future work.
I respect that it's been ongoing since 2015. Good dedication!