"This is the story of how I met and fell in love with the most stunning filly in the world" -Anon
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I'm going to have to say this...
Don't stop the story and write a sequel, that's a horrible decision. You haven't developed Sils and Anons relationship beyond the point of friendship, and I know that you're going to leave it off with them getting together, DONT DO THAT! This is not me wanting you to just continue this story, I'm warning you of a huge cliché when it comes to fics like this, no one likes that.
And if you did make a sequel it wouldn't get any attention, you are better sticking with this story, maybe take a month or two to think about where it is going and how you can develop their relationship.
Your story advertises a romantic relationship between Sliver Spoon and a human yet you haven't developed that beyond the point of crushes.
This comment is a warning, don't go down the path of a sequel, it will only have a negative outcome.
6563231 This input really does help me. I made a mistake, mainly because I was stressed while writing the chapter and felt like this story just downright sucks...
Thank you again for your input, I will think hard about what you said while writing chapter 15.
EDIT: Not gonna end it yet. Gonna let this play out.
6564268 glad I could help
And hey, you (presumably) haven't been writing for that long.
And I know what it feels like to think a story sucks and get stressed out about it. If you're stressed take a bit of time off from writing or find something like a stress ball, trust me it helps
And by the way, if it helps, I find this story to be one of the best stories I've read in awhile
Another, great chapter, keep it up!
Uh... Isn't Silver Spoon about twelve at best? Or this story placed in future?
6572974 in this version age doesn't matter.